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SilentSorcerer
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Seamless author here to give myself five stars✌️
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As serious as this book is, its a hell more funnier, waiting for more such chapters, good luck boss, your writing never ceases to amaze me especially
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For me who is demanding, I think that this work can lead to something the author must manage well
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Sana nga may book 2 n itong story n to.. Nkaka excite naman poh outhor............ Yung tipong gago sa umpisa tapis unti unting nag bago para sayu
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Actually really enjoying this, it feels like the author is too. I think they are spending a good amount of time balancing out the world building and character development so far. I want to see a faster pace, especially on release timeline of chapters because I'm hooked! But it's my fault for being so early haha
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JUST wow, what an intriguing book! I was captivated from the moment I laid eyes on it. The writing is phenomenal, and the character dynamics are absolutely brilliant!
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This novel is a league of its own! The system with realistic business adventures is super entertaining to read. MC and side chars are wonderful and interesting, well written, I'd say.What can ai say except "I highly recommend this!"
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I promise you this novel is worth your time. Please read and leave a comment. Thank you.
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(chap.49) I am giving an honest review before I drop this story. I don't really know if you have a lot of mistakes in writing b/c my brain just makes it right for me if it isn't to bad, so you get a 5-star for decent writing. Stability of updates, well I found this when it had like 300 chapters already, so you get a 5-star for having a lot of chapters. Story Development....one word, slow, I could see if you wanted to start it off slow and let the reader get used to the dungeon system chakra ect but after chapter 40 I began seeing that this story would probably never speed up, my main reason for dropping, but you get a 3-star b/c I saw the effort at least, just too many unnecessary details, chapters, ect. Character Design, I have only seen what like 16 people, two adventure groups, bandit group + knight, Frost(mc) Maya(mc protector) Dark(god) Light(god) and like 3 other people, and I swear the adventurer group(first one) had more personality than the mc, they were just more fun(to me at least), Maya, I can't really say anything about her, she does nothing, she gets mad sometimes and gets embarrassed sometimes, that's it. Dark/Light god, don't really know anything about them, but that is okay for now, considering that they are gods, and Dark god so far is actually pretty decent. Maybe it was b/c I'm at chapter 49, but I would say take some time to get the main people of the story more depth and personality, I would give you a 2-star but since your a new author I will cut you some slack and give you a 3-star. World Background, something that can make or break your story, this is how I see it, you introduce us to this world that is suppose to be huge many species called Nova, then a few chapters later you dump us with information about where the mc is located all in one chapter and you basically don't really go over it again, at least up till chapter 49, all I really remember was he was in a mountain that had strong monsters the deeper you went, I honestly debated if I should have given you one star for World Background, but I went ahead and gave you a two since you did at least explain it in one chapter and went over albeit very little in later chapters. Don't get the wrong idea, I like the idea of your story and maybe I'll come back and read sometimes b/c at the end of things my entire life is reading, that's what I do for hours upon hours, and your story has a lot of potential, every story does, so keep working hard or don't really your choice, this is like my first real review of a story, so it's a bit long, but hope the authors sees this and tells me if it gets better later on.
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wahhh so few chapters ! I want more! exciting read great writing I'll save this for now and binge read it later ! 😍
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i really like this web novel, it's a solid start and i must say the author is a beginner yet very good.
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This is a review for an fFP howvever apocalypse novels are always fun
The Taimanin's Shadow: A Vampire Monarch's Legacy