This is an amazing original piece of work, and being able to read it in real time is great, especially since the author dialogs with all your posts. They take your criticism and fix any mistakes you may point out but will remain firm in the vision for the story. I also like the recent name  change from "my draconic pet system" to what it is now. the previous title seemed very restricting to what pets the MC could get or somehow would turn them into dragon based pets. overall, it's a very good read with great pacing and world building only giving what you need at that moment, because of how big the universe is.  If the author makes other series eventually, I'd love to read

Giving a Five star rating as this is my first Novel that I've ever written.If you like the novel guys please comment and share it would be much appreciated.

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Story is well written, and has quite a bit of future potential. Just remember this though, if you yourself, enjoy writing your stories, then that is the one thing that should matter the most more then anything else. Sometimes, it is not about any sort of money or payment, but should in fact, always be about enjoying sharing your work with your viewers and fans. And that, should always take priority, because if your fans and viewers enjoy reading your work, as well as potential future generations, then that is the one thing, that should matter more to you then anything else. For you see, people are more concerned in living in the here and now. While people me, we like to have a more, long game in mind. Now, don't take this as some sort of negative by any means, I am just saying, that if we want future generations to enjoy this world, then we have to be willing to protect what we love, in an effort to do our best to better our future.

A nice balanced story, the world building is geat and you can feel the characters as real persons with genuine emotions and personality. The action scenes are great, and all in all a captivating story.

I’m enjoying the novel’ the last part was Quite expected I like the details in combat and the reality it brings. Despite being his first book

The suspense is killer! Maybe drop some subtle hints about the bigger mystery earlier on? It’ll make the reveals feel even more mind-blowing

wait who'sgoing to get mc or no /.........?..................................................................................................

The MC is a dumb.WTF, he expels a lot of rapers from the community instead of killing him in the local.Think , you are a community leader , if you don't make a exemple , the others think will out withless any problemNo sense (CHAP 82)

SkylerAn’s “Alpha Instinct” is a story that hands down earns a special place in my heart. This is exactly the type of dark fantasy I’ve always wanted to read. It’s rich with dark and fleshed out lore, characters, and even the power system is beautifully crafted.The novel is written with fluid and vivid descriptions, creating brilliant imagery that I wish I can one day imitate.Leo is such a great and genuine character, and despite how sad I feel for him, I couldn’t imagine his story going any other way. His goals make sense, and the reader can resonate with Leo on an emotional and spiritual level.You’ve earned a full 5 stars from me author. TAKE MY MONEY!!

The writing style sometimes shifts abruptly. The updates for the chapter is kinda confusing, and I want more chapters to give a proper opinion.

𝐈 𝐫𝐚𝐫𝐞𝐥𝐲 𝐭𝐞𝐯𝐢𝐞𝐰 𝐚 𝐛𝐨𝐨𝐤 𝐮𝐧𝐭𝐢𝐥 𝐈 𝐚𝐦 𝐰𝐞𝐥𝐥 𝐢𝐧𝐭𝐨 𝐢𝐭. 𝐈 𝐥𝐢𝐤𝐞 𝐭𝐨 𝐬𝐞𝐞 𝐡𝐨𝐰 𝐭𝐡𝐞 𝐜𝐡𝐫𝐚𝐜𝐭𝐞𝐫𝐬 𝐝𝐞𝐯𝐞𝐥𝐨𝐩, 𝐭𝐡𝐞 𝐩𝐥𝐨𝐭 𝐭𝐡𝐢𝐜𝐤𝐞𝐧𝐬, 𝐰𝐡𝐨 𝐈 𝐰𝐢𝐥𝐥 𝐥𝐨𝐯𝐞 𝐚𝐧𝐝 𝐰𝐡𝐨 𝐈 𝐰𝐢𝐥𝐥 𝐬𝐭𝐫𝐨𝐧𝐠𝐥𝐲 𝐝𝐢𝐬𝐥𝐢𝐤𝐞 𝐭𝐡𝐞𝐢𝐫 𝐰𝐚𝐲𝐬. 𝐖𝐞𝐥𝐥, 𝐈 𝐡𝐚𝐯𝐞 𝐩𝐢𝐜𝐤𝐞𝐝 𝐦𝐲 𝐜𝐡𝐚𝐦𝐩𝐢𝐨𝐧𝐬 𝐭𝐨 𝐥𝐨𝐯𝐞, 𝐚𝐬 𝐰𝐞𝐥𝐥 𝐚𝐬 𝐭𝐡𝐨𝐬𝐞 𝐝𝐞𝐬𝐞𝐫𝐯𝐢𝐧𝐠 𝐭𝐡𝐞 𝐰𝐫𝐚𝐭𝐡 𝐨𝐟 𝐭𝐡𝐞 𝐜𝐡𝐚𝐦𝐩𝐢𝐨𝐧𝐬. 𝐈 𝐚𝐦 𝐥𝐨𝐯𝐢𝐧𝐠 𝐞𝐯𝐞𝐫𝐲 𝐦𝐢𝐧𝐮𝐭𝐞 𝐨𝐟 𝐫𝐞𝐚𝐝𝐢𝐧𝐠. 𝐓𝐡𝐢𝐬 𝐚𝐮𝐭𝐡𝐨𝐫 𝐤𝐧𝐨𝐰𝐬 𝐡𝐨𝐰 𝐭𝐨 𝐦𝐚𝐤𝐞 𝐲𝐨𝐮 𝐥𝐚𝐮𝐠𝐡, 𝐜𝐫𝐲, 𝐠𝐞𝐭 𝐚𝐧𝐠𝐫𝐲, 𝐛𝐞 𝐭𝐡𝐫𝐢𝐥𝐥𝐞𝐝, 𝐚𝐧𝐝 𝐝𝐞𝐟𝐢𝐧𝐢𝐭𝐞𝐥𝐲 𝐠𝐞𝐭 𝐟𝐫𝐮𝐬𝐭𝐫𝐚𝐭𝐞𝐝. 𝐀𝐭 𝐭𝐢𝐦𝐞𝐬, 𝐲𝐨𝐮 𝐰𝐚𝐧𝐭 𝐭𝐨 𝐣𝐮𝐦𝐩 𝐢𝐧 𝐚𝐧𝐝 𝐬𝐭𝐫𝐚𝐧𝐠𝐥𝐞 𝐬𝐨𝐦𝐞𝐨𝐧𝐞, 𝐛𝐮𝐭 𝐭𝐡𝐞𝐧 𝐲𝐨𝐮 𝐫𝐞𝐦𝐞𝐦𝐛𝐞𝐫...𝐚𝐬 𝐦𝐮𝐜𝐡 𝐚𝐬 𝐢𝐭 𝐬𝐞𝐞𝐦𝐬 𝐥𝐢𝐤𝐞 𝐢𝐭...𝐲𝐨𝐮 𝐚𝐫𝐞𝐧'𝐭 𝐩𝐚𝐫𝐭 𝐨𝐟 𝐭𝐡𝐞 𝐬𝐭𝐨𝐫𝐲...𝐲𝐨𝐮 𝐜𝐚𝐧'𝐭 𝐬𝐥𝐚𝐩 𝐭𝐡𝐞 𝐪𝐮𝐞𝐞𝐧, 𝐬𝐭𝐚𝐛 𝐭𝐡𝐞 𝐤𝐢𝐧𝐠, 𝐨𝐫 𝐬𝐭𝐨𝐦𝐩 𝐨𝐧 𝐭𝐡𝐞 𝐭𝐨𝐞𝐬 𝐨𝐟 𝐚𝐧 𝐚𝐝𝐯𝐞𝐫𝐬𝐚𝐫𝐲!! 🙄 𝐘𝐨𝐮 𝐜𝐚𝐧 𝐨𝐧𝐥𝐲 𝐜𝐨𝐦𝐞 𝐛𝐚𝐜𝐤 𝐭𝐨𝐦𝐨𝐫𝐫𝐨𝐰 𝐰𝐢𝐭𝐡 𝐲𝐨𝐮𝐫 𝐟𝐢𝐧𝐠𝐞𝐫𝐬 𝐜𝐫𝐨𝐬𝐬𝐞𝐝, 𝐡𝐨𝐩𝐢𝐧𝐠 𝐬𝐨𝐦𝐞𝐨𝐧𝐞 𝐠𝐨𝐭 𝐰𝐡𝐚𝐭 𝐭𝐡𝐞𝐲 𝐝𝐞𝐬𝐞𝐫𝐯𝐞𝐝...𝐬𝐢𝐠𝐡 𝐬𝐨𝐦𝐞𝐭𝐢𝐦𝐞𝐬 𝐢𝐭 𝐰𝐨𝐧'𝐭 𝐛𝐞 𝐢𝐦𝐦𝐞𝐝𝐢𝐚𝐭𝐞, 𝐛𝐮𝐭 𝐬𝐨 𝐫𝐞𝐰𝐚𝐫𝐝𝐢𝐧𝐠 𝐰𝐡𝐞𝐧 𝐢𝐭 𝐡𝐚𝐩𝐩𝐞𝐧𝐬!! ♥️♥️♥️