World’s Fastest Level up! ~As a Result of the Awakening of My Incompetence Skill [Transfer Within Dungeon], I Became the Strongest Without Being Restricted by the Rules of the Dungeon~ Chapter 102 Discussion

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The novel has many flaws.

First is the dungeon and power system. They are really sh*tty tbh. Like everyone who fight dungeon for a long time will eventually become freaking strong. (Will be more acceptable if the difference in strength cause of level difference isnt so big. Anyway the level cap is almost limitless and there are pp with lv100.000 so it should be good if ur strength isnt much different when u have more or less than several hundred lvl compare to orther pp, that will make skills more important than lvl, high lvl will mostly mean more sp to upgrade more skills)

If everyone goes into a same dungeon then:

- Case 1: everyone appears at same or different place inside that dungeon but they will raid dungeon together. Which mean parasites are common, solo isnt really solo anymore. And also monsters that died by orther group wont revive for u to kill. If it's like that then it will make sense when MC is afraid of being spot when teleport, but it also a nonsense because that will mean MC wont have monsters to fight because orthers (which come before him) have already kill them all.

- Then case 2: parallel worlds. Even tho many pp go to the same dungeon at the same time each team go to a parallel world of that dungeon. They only see orthers in front of the boss room. That means u have ur own monsters to kill and ur own resources to gain, hating parasite can be a logical thing now. But then it doesn't make sense that MC worried about being spot teleport above orthers.

- If u think because of dungeon vastness, the thing in case 1 can make sense then I will sadly tell u that it still didnt. If it's so vast u cant teleport to the lower floor with just 50M cap skill (which MC can the first time he tried to do it, not the second time with different method) so I would say the dungeon atleast the low rank dungeon isnt that vast.

The novel is like it was written by a teenage boy. Lots of only tell but doesnt show. The dialogues and thoughts are just cringed (the contents arent problem, the problem lies on how arthur use them). The plot is like non exist, the battle and dungeon quest are freaking lame. Even the comedy is a nuisance, it isnt funny at all (maybe if this has an anime version with lots of good facial expressions then I could be but sadly this just a novel). This is just a grinding + badly written slice of life (normally even bad japanese novels have ok slice of life)
 
  • #5
From beginning to end the story is captivating. Alexander is a complicated character that you can hate then not as much. A few grammatical errors but a great read! Has warnings for those who rather skip the more graphic parts (I did not).
 
  • #10
I absolutely love this series!  They are all so different but go together amazingly!  I can't wait for the next book to come out!
 
  • #11
the plot of the story is good. i envy tha main character, she is strong. she managed to live well. i want them to live happily, like fairy tale. thank you so much for sharing this very good novel. to the authour, i can say is you did a good job!
 
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