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DaoistIo9Jr3
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Story is well written, and has quite a bit of future potential. Just remember this though, if you yourself, enjoy writing your stories, then that is the one thing that should matter the most more then anything else. Sometimes, it is not about any sort of money or payment, but should in fact, always be about enjoying sharing your work with your viewers and fans. And that, should always take priority, because if your fans and viewers enjoy reading your work, as well as potential future generations, then that is the one thing, that should matter more to you then anything else. For you see, people are more concerned in living in the here and now. While people me, we like to have a more, long game in mind. Now, don't take this as some sort of negative by any means, I am just saying, that if we want future generations to enjoy this world, then we have to be willing to protect what we love, in an effort to do our best to better our future.
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The characters are captivating and engaging, an interesting plot, it all adds up to the great plot, the budding writer looks quite promising.
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This is really interesting and well written. I like it quite a lot. Thank you for writing so many chapters and I can tell you put a lot of time and effort into it. I look forward to being able to read more.
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I really love the book. I have been reading it a while now. The story is amazing đ
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So far, the story is fascinating. I thought the beginning would be typical, like the first chapter of all those manhwas with the usual clichĂ©s, but actually, noâthe author plays well with them. I'm reading slowly but surely, and I hope this story has a good ending. But with the MCâs alignment, I'm starting to get worried.
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It is very interesting can you please quickly release the remaining chapter
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Itâs a good novel so keep it up like this.
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Thank you for saving the Book... GOS.As this is a mix of Fantasy, Mystery, academy and a good amount of action. GOS will explore Dark and light sides of humanity and various mutations. It is definitely not a fast paced book where we begin and have the mc crossing level 100 in a few chapters but rather a slow tempo to explore deeply into characters and world building.what I'm explaining here isn't much of the story just leaving a review to keep us all interested.
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Hello Everyone,I'm the author of this book. My first novel to be precise, so bear with me if there any words or grammar wrong. But if you read this until the end I GUARANTEE It will be worth the trouble of reading this. Support me with powerstones and comment Thanks ;)
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Look man, i already loved the first version of this novel, it was amazing, and now my dear author is re-making even better?? Yeah take this 5 star and shove it into MOREEE CHAPTERS
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love this kind of story can't wait to read mire chapter . for now duty first reading later
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Alright, I just finished reading your latest chapter, and here's what I think:Firstly, can't lie, it's excellentâon par with what you'd expect from a seasoned author. The pacing is tight, the character arcs are progressing naturally, and the tension in the plot feels earned rather than forced. However, I think the main character is taking his situation way too lightly. He is in a forest full of monsters, which could easily kill him. To add to that, he doesn't know anything about the forest he is lost and his helper, his phone, is all but reliable. Yet, somehow someone who chad alled himself a coward isn't freaking out much and can still think straight with an intelligence of average seen from his status.Secondly, he never had a point where he broke down or reflected on his past life. It wasn't like he had no oneâhis sister was still alive before he transmigrated; however, he never once thought about it.And lastly, I'm really enjoying the book, as such It feels off trying to find holes in such a good book so I'd stop here also I hope to see more in the upcoming chapters.--
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