Among Us: The Story

The fact that the MC is 10 ruins the immersion, I could get behind these things happening to 14-15 year olds but 10 is just too young.What kind of bow could 10 years olds use to kill with or without training. Bows are not something someone can pick up and just use in that manner.Everything  gets solved if there is a 4 year time skip before the first guarding mission.The other issues of using the wrong word here and there dont matter as much. Wheres the hook, we were promised someone to protect but this may as well be forgotten.The first chapter ends up as a mess, is this a scene that happens in the future or was this from a previous timeline.I liked the idea but my expectations were subverted and at this point I have little desire to continue reading.

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Yeah baby this novel is the bomb to.  Tis good to read and very addictive. Fried chicken is delicious and very good for the body. I like fried chicken yeah

As an author myself I just wanna say this book is amazing, it keeps you hooked from beginning to end with the uniqueness of a guy who simply loves fire! Not to mention the way his character grows more mature and betters himself as he experiences life. The ending was kind of rushed I saw WAYY more potential for what could’ve been. But when you’v been writing a book this long its only natural the ending gets slightly rushed.And I love how the marked that the story would continue on with his children and Milkyona had even reincarnated to look over the new crimson dragon. 🔥Keep it up man!

the whole thing is s*** it's nothing but another author with a God complex every other sentence is death God this and death God that when his original name is reaper to start with then moves to death then it goes to death God and then he just spams it out with everything don't waste your time with this novel

I really enjoy this novel... From the world building to the character growth I can see why his novel will go boom when it's finally released.

Time to quit this novel. 1. MC has no real goals and motives to become strong. Just a vague saying to "reach martial hights". Don't like aimless arrows shooting nowhere. 2. Story development is too slow. Fed up with this little royal intrigues. This is a martial arts novel, right? 3. No good written character, just a bunch of so-so written cliche ones like "fat and loyal friend

Ahh amazing!!! I don't usually read too much action stories such as this, but because of you, I'm going to start reading! And yours is going to be on the topic of my list hehe. It's awesome! You drew me in with your world building and action. I also loved how it's fast paced and exciting in every chapter and the writing is FLAWLESS. I recommend this to anyone wanting to read a fast-paced, full of action novel. Awesome job author!!!