Wowowowowowowowow just wow its full of mystery and magic. Hats off to the writer's imagination.I wish you more and more success and happiness and future in writing.

Hi everyone I hope you are doing well, I come to present you The Second Prince: A mad prodigious swordsman.Which is the first book and even the first light novel I write and I hope you all had a pleasant read.If you have any advice to give me on my way of writing or other I am willing to listen to you to improve myself.And please help me give visibility to this novel if you liked itThank you very much 🙏🏽

The beginning is very intriguing and captivating. I like that the logic of reality is present, even though the genre is fantasy. Thank you to the author.

yes sacrifices that sitty system boiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiithat's all I need to know

My God, read it! The first chapters are a little harder to digest, with many things happening, and a lot of information, but the setup is phenomenal! The chapter 33 is something that I would never expected. Damian is unhinged and I love him for it. I only wonder what will come next, but for one thing, I'm sure, there will be a looot.

Thank you for the novel I actually expect more action scenes, The Character is well design, and the world-building building also good!                                                                                                   

I hope to see more chapters soon...Really good so far. strong FL

Love the character! love the story! thou shall be peak content

This is a good novel so far, above average for the genre in my opinion except for one problem that I have. I think the conflict developing with the military is a bit dumb. My first issue is, why would the military behave this way? I understand the mc, in my mind he’s basically a feral animal right now, he feels cornered by the world and like he can’t trust anyone but Charlotte, it’s really good and I’m enjoying it a lot. But this military thing could have played out a lot better, firstly we already know the doctor is working with the military as an informant right? So instead of kidnapping his sister like a bunch of idiots and 100% guaranteeing an antagonistic relationship with a future power house, all they had to do was tell the doctor to tell Arthur “I’m sorry but our treatments are not working, with the current technology and medicine that we have your sisters prognosis is approximately 4 weeks. However if you are interested, I have a friend in the military and they have some advanced treatments that could give her more time or be more effective in treating her, if you want I could talk to them for you. I have to tell you though, I’m only saying this because I can see you are a beta tester, this isn’t an opportunity you can buy with money or influence, I don’t know how strong you are but the military is looking for exceptionally strong beta testers. You would have to prove to them that you are worth the effort and investment but if you are strong and show your value, I am positive that they will at the very least be able to give you’re sister more time.” Any military tactician would have approached it more like this, the doctor is already an insider, instead of doing stupid stuff this would have made Arthur hungry for their help, he would be scared and not trusting but with no other choice he would go them and to make sure he doesn’t lose out on the chance to save his sister he would show them more of his power. Now there’s lots of ways to tweak this to make them fall out later and become enemies, have misunderstandings or whatever if you still want conflict to happen. But to me this is would have been a much smarter approach from the military and makes a lot more sense. Still loving the story so far though!

did you read it dear readers? if you did how was it?

Another peak at its making, can't wait to see how much Athex has grown from his last novel.P S:- (I will edit the review later after more chapters are uploaded.)

rivana  got new chance to live here life alongside someone from her past azrael  intrigues me keep it up waiting for their love story and revenge against her killers