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good novel overall, a new system that i have never seen before, The main character knows what he wants and what he is doing. only one bad guy showed up so far and he is not a brainless fool, absolutely love the female characters the only bad thing i can talk about is the grammars otherwise this is a 5/5.

hope everyone will enter to my book and read it and enjoy it 😘

Keith is interesting character in this story. He is soft hearted but he is not clingy as he is not afraid of losing his family ties based on doing something his mind agrees. He does not care what others say and these kind of personalities are rare to see in this world. I am seeing the future of this novel in which any fan reader can predict that keith is going to become a manipulator and his mind games are soon going to get all monsters trapped in their web! Good story 👍🏼 Waiting for the next chapters! It gives an epic feeling how Keith belongs to the Nobles but he’s soft hearted towards the Needies at the same time

Thrilling chapter and riveting start 🔥 looking forward to a continuation! Wish you great inspiration and creative achievements!!! 🌟 keep it up! 💪🏻

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Oh my goshhhhh I freaking love it!!!! Please don't hurt ace dear author or I will be really sad- and made ofcourse 😠Anyway as a Bl Lover- This is for me! Please keep updating! I want them to be together happily!

This is a captivating debut novel that effortlessly combines elements of dystopian fiction, fantasy, and philosophical introspection. With its well-rounded characters, immersive world-building, and thought-provoking themes, he has created a compelling tale that will leave readers eagerly awaiting their next literary endeavor. Whether you're a fan of the genre or simply seeking an engaging and thought-provoking read, this novel is not to be missed.

A good book which has a very nice balance of story and romance.From the first few chapters one can get a proper vibe of the book. This sets up a pretty good foundation for the rest of the story. The story never tries to be other than it was introduced in the beginning, as a result we have a very grounded approach to the story progression. The mc is op but that’s never the concern of this book, the main focus is building relationships and personalities. The book adds a lot of new elements to the ‘Extra’ genre. We start with basic mc dying but intrestingly he wasn’t the one who met the Godess, someone else wished for the mc to be transmigrated. But the story he is sent to is a transmigrated Villain story. Its just intresting to see how the author just subtly incorporated this into the story. Normally I am not in the favor is systems but the system in this book has a unique charm and personality. Its actually a partner than a robotic quest generator. Writing quality of the book is actually pretty good with a good pace. The mc has a smart personality and does not act interact with the other 2 protagonists. He has in own goals and isn’t scared to change the events of the story. Nor does he care about the plot. Another important pro is that the author is actually active in communication. Even though the book has 160+ chapters , I still have a high chance of getting a reply from the author for a comment on the 40th chapter. This is very rare for most books. Again there are always some flaws like the academy tag, just being a plot device for introducing characters. I would also appreciate a bit more slice of life aspect to the story. It would be nice if the personalities and feelings of the FL’s would be more flushed out. I would have also appreciated a bit more world building. Because we somtimes I feel like we are dealing with a more medival vibe with magical devices but the next day our mc is in a amusement park going on a rollercoaster or someone is using a mini recording device to stay the mc. All in all this might not be the most unique book out there but the book knows what niche it is satisfying. And that’s something which I value very much, as from the beginning to the end I am getting what I paid for.This is a very good book for a casual reader and hope more people support and read this book in the future.

Nice work nice work   very good of you  keep it up

yooo damn you  damn you both you and immortals are mad

The way the author explains more of the novel, makes it more interesting than ever .. more updates author