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I enjoyed this series a lot but stopped reading it because the TL just continued posting unedited or barely edited mtl and it was really difficult to follow the plot when multiple paragraphs would repeat and characters genders, or who was the one talking, or who is the subject of a sentence were all unclear or literally the opposite of what they should be. There is a new TL now starting from scratch and from the 3 chapters I read it is much better so I recommend reading that.The story is a bit drawn out and personally I would cut some of the later villain team members out since they barely add anything, but it starts off pretty strong. New TL is writing sentences which are not just coherent but actual literature so it should be much easier to read now, but I would warn new readers Spoiler
that the MC and main heroine have not gotten together until how far I read, and it doesn't seem like they'll do so anytime soon, which is quite frustrating after how the story starts.
[collapse]My other nitpick is the author forgot that they wrote the MC straight up mu*dering people at the start of the story and writing messages in blood, since now everyone thinks MC is a good guy and is just pretending to be bad, and this gag is repeated a lot.
