I gave the book 5 stars. Maybe more than it deserves. but I am human and have feelings so yes. my writing is the problem which Im working at

For the moment it is average, I will wait to see how the author will manage the rest of the story especially since the MC gives the impression of being invincible

The world build is great in my opinion . Keep it up, looking forward to next chapters

Your writing is quite good, and your improvement is very extraordinary, the plot is also quite interesting, but I don't know if this is a platform error or what, there are some words that look messy, in my language. Keep fighting!

A wonderful, beautiful and amazing book. I liked all the elements of psychological and cosmic horror, drama and philosophy. I wish you success and resistance to the disease. You are a project for a historical writer like H.P. Lovecraft.

Early Author review for potential readers. This novel is me just writing whatever I want. In saying that, while intimacy is a core component of the plot of this book, I do not intend for it to be smut or contain any lemons.It is hard to balance, but I will be trying to exercise creativity and euphamisms to describe the plot while avoiding explicit details. If I feel I have gone too far in any scenes, I will most likely revise and change it.In saying this, I hope you enjoy it as it is for sure a new and novel idea that mashes together a wide range of tropes and genres. There will be world hopping to various worlds, and yes this is a harem, although you can expect at least one of the female leads to work at reducing that harem.Engage in descussion, review, and enjoy.Disclaimer, there will be some typos and grammatical errors. I suck at editing.

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Please keep it coming author ,I don't like the suspense 🥺♥️♥️

I’m enjoying the flow of the story . I really like the FL . Can’t wait to see what is next!

The story has great potential and the creativity is admirable. Keep it up author.

Hello Dear Readers,Thank you for checking out my historical romance novel. The story is loosely set in the Ming Dynasty, but with some poetic licence. The FL is naive and innocent because she's been raised in the inner courtyards, but she's smart, talented and she knows what she wants. 3 ML's are competing for her affections. The prince is arrogant, aggressive and used to getting his way, the poet is free-spirited, happy-go-lucky and handsome, the commander is stoney-faced and puts duty first. Chapter 10 is where this love quadrangle kicks-off and the rivalry between these three friends gets increasingly fierce!Who will our FL choose, or will her parents choose for her? How does a once-in-a-generation beauty avoid the mandatory concubine selections at the palace? Being raised in a bubble where everyone tells her she's ugly, there's plenty of comedy as she's allowed out of the mansion and misunderstands the effect her face has on men. And then there's the problem of an increasingly curvaceous figure when everything you've been taught tells you that female beauty only comes in a slim package.If you enjoy Asian historical romance, cdrama/kdrama, love triangles, jealousy and possessiveness, FL in a slow-burn love story, arranged marriages, pure and innocent love with YA spiciness, then this is for you.I hope readers will support me with votes, reviews and comments - with your support for the book I will release >20 chapters a week. Looking forward to hearing from you dear readers <3

another great novel to read for educational purposes of course...trust me just read it. glad to see another novel from this top tier author.