20 chapters in, and the story itself hasn't even actually started yet. Not to mention the MC is like a broken record that keeps on repeating the same things over and over and over again

very good START to the story keep it going, story seems built well and thought out.dont lose patience or get bored i want to see this continue.

Hi author I like the novel so far and I will give you some suggestions or ideas for a new novel or your current novel and I just finished reading the latest chapter and gave you all my power stone and I would have gave you some of my golden tickets but I do not see a way to give you some of my golden tickets

Ngl I felt like I was watching a movie, I really like the writing style.(My Spotify began played a song on shuffle that fit so wel it legit enhanced my experience for like the first 2 chapters lol)

I love a good arrangement relationship💜💜💜💜

super good book, recommended for anyone looking for a good fantasy novel to read

Myalis is an incredible high fantasy epic! The way you blend political intrigue, deep world-building, and intense action is truly captivating. Caelum’s journey to restore his fallen kingdom’s honor is both thrilling and emotionally complex, especially with the deadly tournament and shifting alliances. The relationships between the six divided nations are so well-crafted, and every twist kept me on the edge of my seat.As a reader, I was hooked from start to finish. Your ability to weave suspense and moral complexity into every character’s story is fantastic. Fans of intricate politics and high-stakes adventure will definitely love this. Can't wait to see what comes next!

I'm not really a historical fiction fan, but this story has me intrigued. Everything about the story is so detailed that I'm really curious to see how this story goes.

The story starts with an interesting idea, combining growth, power, and a unique world. The pacing is normal, making it easy to follow, and the challenges faced by the protagonist are meaningful.The writing is clear, though minor grammar issues might distract some readers. Overall, it's a promising start with good potential for improvement and development.

I absolutely love this book 😊Keep up the good work.

I want to finish this book but I have so many responsibilities right now. In the future, You will be reading this yourself and finish this greatest story that you ever made.

it is interesting .With a pov story like this, people may find  a lot in common with this novel .so far it's good