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AmazeAngelo67y
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- July 1,2024
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love this book!!!
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Enjoying the book so far and there's a lot of potential in it. Though a bit slow at the beginning the progression of the story feels nice. Can't wait to read more.
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If I stay in my current state of mind and circumstances long enough you guys will get a good novel to read I hope you like it.please don't be meanšš
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Don't mind me. I'm just shamelessly reviewing my first book. don't hesitate to read it guys.
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As the title of this book says, please help UelUel, The PoruShark Writer, save 100,000 USD with this Ero-Novel.
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Hello great author, I'm a huge fan of your work! Your book left a lasting impression on me, and I believe it has the potential to reach even more readers. I'd be honored to share some thoughts on how to enhance its impact and visibility. Would you be open to hearing my thoughts?
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I like the story but for new readers, i suggest let this one marinate. its really too early and the chapters are pretty short. It has unique power systems and abilities which aren't all that common in stories. The story uses a bit of religious thematics for explain a perticular character very early on which was kinda unique for a story i thought was just a generic harem PokƩmon collector. i do hope author can stay true to the original premise rather do some powerfantasy galaxy busting planet destroying stuff. I dont mind if its done sparringly ig and not for the sake of creating higher realms after higher relams for the sake of the 'powerscaling' and trying to make the op'est mc of all time.Almost all story just create mindnumbing garbage story where neither readers or author himself has a clue to how to make fights that high level . and as to why this character is truly stronger then that character other then just an arbitrary name tag of this level beats that level.i was kinda all over the place with that but the gist is, story starts with the premise of mc wanting to become the greatest harem protag of all time, so the focus should be on that. power levels and fight is second.
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Havenāt made it super far, but it already seems like itās licking up in pace. The setting is different from most fantasy web-novels, but not so much that it feels jarring to read. Interested to see where this goes!
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The beginning is very intriguing and captivating. I like that the logic of reality is present, even though the genre is fantasy. Thank you to the author.
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Apologies for any inconvenience caused. Iāve created a beautiful story, but I didnāt fully understand how to share it with you all. I thought it might be helpful to update the current chapters from another POV. If you think differently, please let me know, as Iām starting to rewrite them again. Thank you for your understanding!"
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This was a fun read. The characters were engaging and the story flowed well. The funny elements made for more than few smiles so that was nice. I'm looking forward to moreš
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release more you author or i will baseball yer ass (kidding) but release cause I like this one
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