Quick Transmigration System: Male God, Come Here Chapter 421 Discussion

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I generally dont rate novel so low until snd unless its utterly horrible. This novel is not that, but its so bad in many ways..... In this essay I will list em out

  1. Arcs after acrs, its the same story. Setting amd character names change. But nothing else. No logical story, no deep emotions (real), no character development, no face slap. MC transmigrates, meet slag ML and then starts sheeding tears, act weak pitiful, sometimes overly brave and strong snd bam 100% love. She doesnt do anything to sustain in her body's character. No mention of body's relatives or thier stories. It completely revolves around MC, ML and if we want jealousy in the mix then a second ML. Author cant bother lol.
  2. MC just dont do absolutely anything other than using her face and acting skills. I will bet my left kidney, if MC was ugly and acted the same way, ML wouldnt be falling so hard so fast Thats how superior, her acting is!
  3. Now this one pissed me off so much. I did not even pick this pook for any romance or smut. There are other bools for it. But author has this terrible habit of hanging readers appetite. MC completes side quests and is gifted some user packs, which are so convenient to not let her have s*x with ML. Again, literally no 1 is interested to read it, but its author terrible attempt at foreplay on the readers. At this point, even a 1 word that they done the deal and moved onto the next part of plot qoild be enoguh. But No!
  4. Not sure how many acrs I am, just to kill my time, but not a single thing changes in all these arcs. MC is soo bland. No mention of her emotions being involved. She calls MLs scum and slags, but she oh so conveniently cheats thier feelings without a hint of remorse. Forget remorse she doeant even put half a cent of any humanly emotions in it. Which would have been cool with me, if she and system dont kewp yapping about how terrible MLs are with feelings. Hypocrisy
  5. Ive read stories wer MC dies and cried buckets, but here I cant even spare some feelings cause I don't see any point. There was no love story, that broke. Im still wondering how other readers are finding them heartbreaking ?
Saw this novel. has 3000+ chaps and if with this review if I can save even 1 person, ill be glad.

Completely off track, but I think the way this author tries to portray MC as conservative (repeatedly blocking the actual event), while simultaneously advocatingkisses as way to earn life points, gain ML affection is so damn frustrating. Just wish we have some clean story with actual plot and not authors poor attempt to portray a strong women who doesnt doesnt to body pleasure. Oh horror!
 
  • #2
Amazing! I loved everything about this book. Great job, author! I would also love a story about Neo as he gets older. Your writing is impeccable!
 
  • #4
Had some spelling errors but loved the twists and turns that came with it. Could definitely see watching this as a movie. Great story line.
 
  • #5
Goooosssshhhhh!!!!! Their meeting again is way way more than I have expected. And that Lucia really copied Anne’s face
 
  • #6
I enjoyed the book from beginning to end. Full of adventure, teasing and hard to put down in a busy schedule.
 
  • #8
I love this book, wish I could just read without stopping but I don’t have enough bonus ...
 
  • #9
And please write some non-virgin female leads. This manwhore-virgin has become so boring and repetitive. Mafia and dark romance does not mean you have to write about virgin FMCs only. Please look into this.
 
  • #10
How long for an update? Don't authors have time frames for updates? Or is it the norm to keep readers stringing along. No matter how good the storyline is its disgusting
 
  • #11
Gosh after reading devin ... you become one of my fav writer ! Loving this story so far
 
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