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ItsPraveen
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- July 1,2024
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It's not just a novel , it's a rousing success ,a very vibrant and wonderful book , with well tailored worlds and great characters , awesome work
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Author's Shameless review.support it! its my first creation and i will put all my heart into it
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I can tell from synopsis that this is going be a beautiful piece. I haven't been able to login to the app since the beginning of this year. Once I fixed it,I will read this story to the end...just like the others
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Just another cycle of abuse story with no love or romance. Don't waste your time. The characters aren't even attention grabbing. One more abuse story after another. I want to feel happy and jealous from romance not pity that I wasted time and coins on another depressing abuse novel. Where are decent FL and ML...
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I truly admire how the author has crafted the setting of Dan Vu Academy—it’s elegant, prestigious, yet shrouded in mystery. The main characters, especially Minh Hoang and Thanh Khai, are depicted in a way that makes them incredibly captivating. The contrast between Minh Hoang’s carefree and adorable nature and Thanh Khai’s cold yet deeply emotional personality adds layers of intrigue and emotional depth to the story.That being said, I have a few humble suggestions that might enhance the story even further:t1.tPacing & Engagement: Some parts of the story progress at a slower pace. If the author could add more tension, dramatic twists, or gripping moments, it would make the plot even more compelling.t2.tSide Character Development: There are several side characters with great potential. If they had more presence or played a more significant role in the storyline, it would add richness and depth to the narrative.t3.tUnexpected Twists & Suspense: Given the elements of mystery and power dynamics, introducing more surprising plot twists or intense turning points could make the story even more thrilling.Overall, this novel holds immense potential. I’m genuinely excited for the upcoming chapters and believe that the story will only get more captivating from here! Wishing the author continued success and hoping more readers will fall in love with this amazing work~
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is there going to be any more chapters coming?
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Amazing story I loved it from the first chapter.
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A promising start, and the system is not op.
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It's a gender reversal story. MC has a rather troubled past and the story is going slow and steady so far.There have been sum noice scenes but my only complaint is that the chapters are kinda short.
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Awesome Man Awesome......................
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I rarely write reviews but this whole story was a massive disappointment. Going into this I thought it would be really good due to the amount of 5 star reviews and the concept of the novel however I was quickly disappointed. There a three main issues that I have with this novel1. The author has a weird grasp of economics, the way the currency was setup up had problems from the beginning however these could be overlooked until the author decided to start adding USD conversion at which point everything went downhill. For perspective the author claims that maids in the MCs family get paid a relatively high wage of 1 gold a month. However the author later says that 1,000 gold = $10,000 (1 gold = $10) meaning that the maids make less than 1/560 of the average monthly salary in the US. This could maybe make sense if the MC was in a third world country where labor costs were low however the MC is the son of the richest family in the world and obviously does not live in a poor area. I got past this point however and kept reading, however shortly after when the MC introduces chess it is priced at 100 bronze per set which would be $0.001 per set. You can buy ramen in most gas stations for $1 meaning 1 ramen noodles container = 1,000 chess sets. Make it make sense. Again this would maybe be fine if the author didn’t bring up the amount the MC made in USD repeatedly. 2. The MC tries to implement modern social practices that do not make sense in a medieval setting onto this world (e.g. The MC tries to force all the house staff to work a maximum of 8 hours per day and no more, great thought except it makes no sense in a medieval society where work hours are determined by sunrise and sunset) 3. Cringe / Cliche. Everything seems to always work out perfectly for the MC with little to no effort, MC follows reincarnator 101 on steroid template to make money using modern ideas but has an AI that does all the work and creates perfect blueprints. What really irked me though was the MC just straight up giving away the soap recipe to other people because he didn’t want to hurt their business and wanted everyone to live peacefully and happily. Verdict: Had and has potential, author should rewrite what they have an try again. Would not recommend reading until the author makes some edits and fixes some of the biggest issues specifically the currency.
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This looks like an apocalyptic game! And if the plot was big enough, it certainly would deserve to be turned into a game!
Glass Dynasty