Chapters are a little long try to keep it between 800-1200 word count. You want people to read more. I like the story lots of gore and apocalyptic themes here. This is going to be an interesting read!

Wow, I got hooked in the first chapter I love it. Hope I can see more of this work. And I can be able to read more💯💯💯🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🙏🙏🙏

still keeping the femme family flying. all hail author San.

I really am disappointed with this story. The FL is is trained from young age to be ML 's wife more like slave while ML abuses her all the time when he is waiting for her to react aggressively to it instead of being submissive. I believe if you love someone you can never hurt them.

absolutely amazing after the latest chapter, 26, the action is invigorating and caelith's powes are so unique!

I haven't read the whole novel but the first 6 chapters exposes the plot of the novel without it's being laggy, filled with love and strong emotions between two mates.Not gonna say much because I don't wanna be a spoiler.But I highly recommend

The novel is good, I'm following it in Spanish since it's more advanced.

Since I am the one who created this book I should probably congratulate myself if someone   chooses not toWell aside from that this series is my second work and in all truth it is the one I really have faith inHere are the things to expect from this story1. You will definitely not see a good and kind mc here. He might even be like fang yuan or even worse since I am a Faithful follower in the ways of fang yuan so people who loves good mc this will definitely not be your cup of tea2. Do not expect an op mc from this show. He will not be really strong but he will also not be really weak. Although he might be really strong in the eyes of humans in the future of this novel3. This mc will suffer alot. The mc will go through unimaginable pain to achieve his dream. And maybe at a certain point he might go insane4. The novel will have romance in it but do not expect it to be all flowers and roses as it could end at any given moment.5. Do not try to do the things which our mc will do in this novel as if u do then u will be considered by society the devil himselfWell then I just wanted to tell readers of this novel this things so If you know you do nor like bad mc's NEVER READ THIS!!! Well I hope to see you all in the future❤️❤️❤️❤️

my selfish review is as follows: i really wish there were more chapters available to binge, because the story became really hard to put down after awhile 😂.. in all honesty i would have given this novel five stars if there were bulk chapters as the story is worth supporting 😅👍 great job author 👏👏👏

Great at start but very less chapter later. Also it felt like I'm reading an AI made novel.

This is a fantastic fantasy novel, with intricate design of system! It's really fast pace, thrilling, and most of all, gripping FUN!The writing is also fire too. Smooth flow and seamless description. Please check this out! The author is really crafting this with extreme dedication!

A selfish review from the author here. First time writing  a webnovel, please do let me know what you think of the book 🙏