WHISPERS OF THE FORGOTTEN HEART

The story is good, specially the first 5 chaps so far. also the world background and characters are also amazing with there being hell and Lucifer and stuff and of course the system also🔥 But I guess the grammar needs a bit more polishing, but doesn’t really affect much in the story😊 So I’ll give it a 4.8 hehe

I just hope that this version continues to be updated after reaching the bottom of the other one, because lately the author only writes that, the other few I leave aside, the rest is a very good story.

is this story inspired by "Reincarnated Villain makes the heroines tearfully beg for forgiveness"?

one of my dream books that I always wanted to read. the plot seems interesting and is really detailed too, also main character is a type that I rarely see (a character that truly is a monster that follows their own instinct instead of staying with human morality but monster body) the only problem is while reading I saw some word errors like missing sentence or a wrong usage of words English is not my first language so I may be wrong on that.. overall it's really good story but not for soft stomach imo.

And all that glitters is gold

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-Kiss. My. Feet.

"But I'm the commander, the head of the criminals. I need to keep a confident and rough personality, their sanity depends on it. Imagine a scary cat, insecure leader, would you follow their lead or look for someone more trustworthy?" The blonde whispers in the younger's left ear, putting his hand in Jimin's hips and pulling their bodies together slowly. Jimin was frozen, Yoongi sometimes did touch him in several places and being really intimate, it never really bothered Jimin. Actually, it made Jimin feel some kind of way, he couldn't recognize the feeling, but he would always shake and get nervous when they would get really close. Jimin's response was to stay still, he didn't know exactly how to react since a situation like this has never happened before with Yoongi. Jimin gulped; "I just know that I'd follow you anywhere, and do anything you tell me to do."