This over-arching dynamic between Ronan and Riven is very intriguing I hope it comes to a big climax at some point 😏 and overall very well written for the author's first attempt!! Loving it

i really don't know how to rate my work but here I am publishing my first draft🫣pls be kind to let me know if there's any errors and wether or not u like my story so far🥲🥲

below average,story pacing is too slow,sometimes it takes whole chapter to describe the appearance of a character,mc don't even use his abilities property,comedy feels pretty forced,

Gangsters, deception, and mayhem. The action starts and never lets up. This is a short BL with not one, but two, couples to ship. Enemies turned lovers united to best a common foe.The characters are well-developed, maneuvering through a cutthroat world, vying to be king of the land. The pacing is quick. It reads like watching a live action movie. What I liked the most is the strength and wit of the characters.

Good Start, Like I said it can be improved.... not being to harsh as this is your first novel but, you already are writing two best fanfics rn... hopefully you will continue and will not drop it

update more and make r18 chapters more in quantity and quality

I just finished reading your book, and I have to say, it’s absolutely fantastic! I truly enjoyed it. I’d love to offer a few tips that might help boost the performance and visibility of your book even more. I believe these could take your work to the next level

Let me have the honor of being the first to review it! 💅💅Oh, the beginning was a cliffhanger on its own. The female lead is relatable and quite interesting to read; she’s truly unique. But that tutor—let me skin him alive! Son of a—he’s lucky he’s a fictional character and that I can’t find him! 😤The plot takes a unique approach, but I don’t expect anything less from this amazing author. I can’t wait to see this book succeed. More chapters, please, author! 🐣

Interesting read, got me invested in the mc’s emotional development and the relationships he has with his family. The portrayal of loneliness and the feelings of isolation were very well described. Good story overall.

Hey I’m curious if the Mac is apart of a baron household or a royal household

is this story inspired by "Reincarnated Villain makes the heroines tearfully beg for forgiveness"?

As soon as i saw first chapter i said hold up this is good.Every chapter is better then previous one!Keep it up!