Shadow of Glory

This book is one of the classic cultivation books but with a unique take on it. Following the story of the MC after he ascends to heaven, The story is slowly unraveling a mystery that looks to be very interesting. The MC has a personality that you cant help but love, hes witty, loves to face slap, has great humor, and is ruthless. Also cultivates in one of the most unique ways I've ever seen. The grammer mistakes are little to none and the charecter development is great. I highly reccomend reading as this story has as much potential as LOPH.

I LOVE THIS BOOK AND ITS AMAZING!!! U DID U STOP WRITING?? PLEASE COME BACK AND START WRITING AGAIN!! I REALLY WANT THE BOOK TO KEEP GOING!!!

Although yhe story was interesting, the author spends too much time on world building amd character building. The time transitions are also too much, with about 3-5 time skips each chapters without words but "..." to get to another point in the story. In my opinion it was overdone.

So I will gonna rate this 5 star, I already read the previous novel and I like how this rewrite so far giving his mother a store maybe this will give different vibes from the siblings hahaha

hello author, when I read your novel at first I was boring and the story was a bit cliche with the case of the young Chinese master,.. but I read on and on actually this story is quite interesting, and if possible I hope the author can update the next chapters quickly, so that the readers you can be more flexible in reading your work... oh yes and if you can, you can show more scenes of 18+, so that readers can be even more energetic, greetings reading, yes, everyone does think this is trivial, but it has its own charm for me authors,....and I also hope that this will have a netoric scene that the MC will seize the woman who saves time in the hospital, and I really hope that author... I have imagined that a woman named Emma is very beautiful and sexy, and I hope she can be a companion mc hahahaha...

As I was reading I was pleasantly surprised by the easy flow of the story. It's easy to read and I didn't have to go over the same sentence/paragraph twice to understand what the author was trying to say. There is good pacing, and the paragraphs were nicely aligned. It tells me that the author has already grasped the basics of writing and has the potential for improvement in the future. The author should give themselves a pat in the back. Now for the cons: For most new writers when writing in the first person POV they do tend to overuse inner monologues as opposed to utilizing gestures and facial expressions as hints to the character's inner turmoils. Verbs such as frowning, smirking can also indicate mood. I would also like to see more active sentences rather than passive ones; it makes me more emotionally engaged.Overall it is a very good story and a worthwhile read. Other than the writing which has room for growth, the character development, world-building, and plot progression is intriguing and makes you hooked onto the story. Good job!

First time to read about this kind of magic attributes . Interesting 🤔

*She headed into the next elevator and presses the 21st floor and soon arrived at the front desk where a girl named Stella was sitting behind the computer*