Whispers from the Forgotten Land

the first few chapters are good. I hope you will update more soon.

why the heroine is so submissive overlooking the story is good 👍

not bad                                                                  .

Is this a good story or not? I honestly don't know.However after the last work of this translator, I honestly trust his judgment and translation skills so I will give this a five star from the start!Thanks for your hard work and good luck!

"Me, Oh I didn't do a single thing ya know, I even let those ANBU get Scott free for all the abuse my brother has to face"

The noise in the forest also came alive everything has a heartbeat and cloud now could hear them all from the bird flying past him to the snake that was hunting a mouse not to fair from him.

Author here and as the author, I will shamelessly give myself a five-star.Hehe, that aside, I had promised myself I will only give this book a review once it reaches the 50th chapter which we have happily reached.Now, unto the storyThis is my first time writing a Chinese novel and it's challenging because I research all the time.I will review my book in different sections.Writing Quality: I don't have a good writing quality as I edit my book a lot. I speak English but it's not my first language and it's hard because I tend to mix up some words together, so forgive me if you find some mistakes.Story Development : I can't say a lot for this because I tend to go with the flow which is something I enjoy. I like the thrill of wanting to know what the next chapter has in store for me.Character Design: I will give myself a five-star here because I believe I have crafted beautiful characters and let me say something, my favourite character is Xin Yi, the FL's brother. Don't ask me whyUpdating Stability: Two chapters daily, I give myself a pat on the back because I have been doing a good job so far (But if I can get magic castles, three chapters in addition to my normal two chapters daily)World Background: I have really done a good job here or so I think.Basically, just keep reading and see what Xin Yan and Li Qiang has in store for us. I'm also eager to know.Thank you for supporting me thus far.

I expected much from this novel. Way too much.Although confusing during the first few chapters, it evolved wonderfully.The story line is pretty good with some decent twist and turns to keep you hooked. Until random powerful characters shows up out of nowhere to mess up what could have been a good climax. Once was tolerable, but this keeps happening now. It's like the author doesn't want anyone to die.What happens when you've read over two hundred fifty chapters and none of the major enemies (There's a LOT of them) don't die at all because they all of a sudden gets saved by stupidly random events. It gets boring quckly.Sigh. For the purpose of word count, the author decides to mess it all up. I hope it gets better. But for now, this is so anticlimactic.The current arc is so disappointing.