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veltovagne
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- July 1,2024
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wow another superhero novel, it's peak lot of potential, the storyline characters world building everything was well made keep up the good work.
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Shameless? Indeed. Necessary? I have no idea, but the page looks much better now haha. I would rather have readers form their own opinions as they read on, so I will do what the others have done before me and discuss what to expect in this story. The World: The universe of Crown Eater is a dystopian/fantasy/high-medieval world where a divine entity called the Inverted Tree constantly mutates living beings into creatures called Beasts. Society is ruled by people who harness its power and do cool or horrifying stuff with it. They are called Vessels.MC: While he is only a child at the beginning of the story, Kallen is a street kid who doesn't know much about the world outside his city but knows how vicious people can be. He is quite a cynical but loyal (for now) street kid who will be dragged into a scheme way above his pay grade, losing his innocence as he grows up. But something that won't change: He won't stop until he gets what he wants.Extra Stuff: No, harem. I'm not saying he would only have one relationship, but yeah, there is no harem. The plot will take time to kick in; the first few chapters will properly install the roots of some key narratives then quickly speed up. The goal is a coming-of-age/rise-to-power/weak-to-strong origin story from start to finish.Oh, and for my reincarnator aficionados, it's NOT clickbait, haha. I decided to execute it with a little twist that should appear pretty early in the story, so I ask for patience.Updates: Once a day, until I reached the end of most of my backlog. Then it would be twice a week. My job doesn't allow me to spend the time I wish I could invest in this story.Enjoy!
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Consistently updates story! I love the interaction between characters, The Rat King is my favorite, he is so stoic and regal! I really love the way the author describes people and places! It is so vivid, it feels like I am there.
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Im interested for sure. There is definitely face slapping, but it is done in a really believable way that im really enjoying. The system makes sense, and while I do wish it was explained a little more what certain things mean and how they work, its not affecting the story and of things are explained too much it would actually be a demerit since it would cut into immersion. As it stands, it's well balanced and really enjoyable. I suspect that if it remains on this level moving forward, the story will quickly become one of my favorites. Nicely done.
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"Writing this book has been a journey. I started with one idea, but the characters took on lives of their own. Ace’s struggles, Kieran’s stubbornness, and Rehan’s unpredictability made every chapter exciting to write. Balancing romance, supernatural conflicts, and character growth wasn’t always easy, but I loved every moment of it. I hope readers enjoy the twists, emotions, and surprises as much as I did creating them."
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You know when a webnovel is written by an amateur when its title has grammatical errors. "I can mind-reading" lol
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Story is slow paced. One chapter daily is not acceptable. Even chapter is not that long. I love the storyline. Requesting the author to publish more or longer chapters. Thank you.
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I love this story! At 24 ch its everything I hope it would be. I'm enchanted by Blaze and Amelia. I'm looking forward to their budding relationship. I sense there will be romance, character growth, action, betrayal, friendships, family drama, and so much more. It's definitely a must-read. 💚🤍💛
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Its fine, keep the flow of the story just like this with stable development.
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Hi there i have been reading this book and i think it is a fantastic book that has the potential to grow a lot more so if you are interested in publishing advance chapter this fanfic to my platform please contact me and we can further negotiations details. this is my Instagram [yurichi_adrenaline]And please consider this deal it may change your life and for confirmation we are not talking about pateron and the chapters will be free for readers but you will be make thousand from this deal Thank you Best regards for your journey ahead Adrenaline
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Very good novel i recommend you read it has few error so if your worried about it don't
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So far so good keep up the good work, more updates please 🙏
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