I just scroll and when I saw a title I was hesitate if I will see this story then when I saw the plot, I was able to amze and then the chapters never disappointed me, I highly recommend this story 😁

Well Writing a review for your own book is not a good idea so they say? But whatever, so I’ll just say a few things. Also, if you have any questions about the novel, you can leave them in the comments! I truly don’t mind answering.“First of all, what is this book about?”It’s about a young hunter named Sakamoto, who unknowingly carries the legacy of the First Men—a forgotten lineage of the strongest warriors to ever exist. As the world is thrown into chaos by a secret war between powerful factions, Sakamoto must uncover the truth about his origins, harness the terrifying force within him, and survive against those who seek to control or destroy him.“What type of guy is Sakamoto?”Familiar name lol i know but,He’s a reluctant warrior burdened by fate. Once an ordinary young man, he’s thrown into a world of monsters, hunters, and gods, where he has no choice but to adapt. He’s loyal, determined, and dangerously unpredictable—especially with the forbidden entity  inside him.“God-like Strength?”Not exactly. Sakamoto is strong, but his power comes at a price. Every ability he gains brings him closer to losing himself. He has to struggle, train, and master his own limits—because in this world, even the strongest can fall. Romance?”Not exactly, I’m sorry but if I have a change of mind there will be but it will be a slow burn. With the weight of destiny on his shoulders, Sakamoto doesn’t have time for love… but sometimes, emotions can’t be ignored.Chapter updating?Right now, I’m focused on crafting each chapter carefully. Updates will be consistent as the story unfolds, and major arcs will be planned ahead to keep the pacing strong, But that depends on a lot of things though.And, finally…Why do u review this book? Some would wonder if this book will be worth it and my answer for you is Yes, As an Author I always learn and adapt that’s one thing I want you to know. So I know And  think this book is going to be  good. I believe in my story. If you love a mix of intense battles, deep lore, and strong character development,plots, then The First Men Chronicles is something you won’t want to miss!I won’t say too much. Join the train and trust the process.

This is a solid foundation for a gripping fantasy tale. With careful attention to character development, thematic exploration, and originality, your story has the potential to resonate with audiences, keep going.

The chapter one is amazing I love the way you balance humour and seriousness... I will reading i want to see more PS why were they taking off their clothes 🤣🤣🤣

the first few chapters are good. I hope you will update more soon.

This is the first time I'm giving a new book 5 stars. Please don't disappoint me and stop posting halfway

Eu persoalmente adorei a historia, sou catolico ainda fico um pouco chateado por Deus ser o vilão dessa historia, mais fora isso essa historia é muito incrivel eu super recomendo.

Mc has to constantly show disdain for anything feminine or else he will shrivel up and cease to exist. Exhausting.

At the beginning, I felt sad for the Mc who seems to be young lady who is emotional drained and depressed . But as the story progresses, I understand that he was just like every typical MC who is still trying to figure out his life and those around him. But , the author did a great job in the story setting, and World building. ...

"Hey [Failed genius], HUGE congratulations on publishing your first book! I'm beyond thrilled for you!Your hard work and dedication have finally paid off, and I couldn't be more proud of you! Your book is going to inspire and captivate so many readers.Now, I have a special request for you... In your next book (because I know there will be many more!), can you please add a character named after me? It would be an absolute honor!Once again, congratulations on this incredible achievement! Can't wait to read your book and celebrate with you!"

its was awesome.will come back to read another chapter 😊keep doing the good work

I have read up to chapter 150.+ English is ok for a non-native like me. Can't really talk about quality though.+ Story is frequently updated.Now for the interesting part of the reveiw :- The background is unclear. Many things should be introduced early on but aren't. Some key components of the story just pop in place when author need them. (the relationship between MC and Female lead, for example). It gets a bit better after the story unravel a bit, but still unclear most of the time.+ Character are fun, some are quirky. Sometimes it feels forced but that's ok. Main characters are lovable, the banter is nice, and relationships dynamics are clear and well explained.+/- Story developpement is cut into two part : in the game and out of the game. It feels like two different stories for now. There is potential I think, but it feels weird at times.I was hooked around chapter thirty I think ? But paywall at 150 chapters.= Could be a fun read if you are looking for something to keep you busy between two books.