wasted potential

Hello, here is Ory, the author. First of all, I don't know how this story is going to turn out, but I see a lot of rather cliché stories on the internet and I'm trying to innovate with this one, so I'm trying to do my best :)So, what's the story about: Well, it's about a boy named Shin who wants to find his sister who mysteriously disappeared 5 years ago in an event that changed Shin to the core.Is there romance?  Yes, but no harem.As for the pace of publication, I'll try to do 1 chapter a week, maybe more (I'm not full time), except when I have more free time when I'll publish more, so add the book to the library. If you have any questions or suggestions, you can put them in the comments, I'll try to answer.  Also, this story is translated from English by myself so if you see any errors please let me know

I'm not really a historical fiction fan, but this story has me intrigued. Everything about the story is so detailed that I'm really curious to see how this story goes.

~I put both good and bad in the reviw so scroll down to see both~Good things~Okay so ive only reas about 40 chapters so far so take with a grain of salt buti thunk the author has a really good idea and good direction she went with the story as a whole and the development while fast makes sense for the Mc. there are also hardly any gramatical errors and that makes reading this story that much smoother. another thing i loved about the story is the evolution part as EoC was one of my favorite books and i thought it had a great system.Bad things~Ive only read about 40 chaps in the story but i wanted to say something. In the story you dont explain all of the skills and what they do like the skills she got from the phonix or some of those from the harpys and i just think its bad world building. i can accept that but the kingdom thing when she got back is just terrible i mean they the people there evolved from not even having anything above stone tools to staight up having lamps and a city in like 10 days. Then there is the whole population issue as the coty should only have around 50-100 people when the non combatants were evacuated before the fight but in just like 3 days since that happened there was unprecedented development. it just dosent make sense in my opinion. another criticism i have is that the pacing is just so incredibly break neck that it makes it hard to follow as it took the mc like 20 days to go from being a chicken to killing a phonix and having a kingdom.

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