Not too bad for a startup ...but you can do better with the world background

so I'm at 7 chapter and one thing for sure alex is my favourite character in this story and you know what i liked more it's a first person's pov i like these kind of novels I'm usually write tpp story so it's pretty interesting for me maybe i learn from your story I'm looking forward to it and this is a must read book

All I can say is 5 STARS! I only found this after reading another novel written by her sister but I have to say this is one of my top 3 favorite apocalypse novels. I love that the MC has water abilities in this one since it's often overlooked despite its potential to be one of the best abilities. FL is cute and smart. I love that she prioritizes herself and her people over saving people who will just end up taking advantage of her kindness. The ML smells heavily of green tea and I live for it. He's such a sweetie when it comes to his wife 😊  I especially love that the main couple communicates instead of dancing around problems for the sake of drama. This is one of the few stories I would willingly trans migrate into a side character in just to watch the leads get together. (Don't pretend you haven't thought about it before) overall I absolutely love this story and I can't wait for the next update!

When it comes to Mystery and story development, I'll give the story a 10/10. I've been reading it for a while now and I still can't put it down. Who kidnapped them? what is the organization after? the Author is just killing me by leaving me hanging.

Man, This novel is underrated author I have been watching your previous version of  this novel which was average, But this is on a another level keep Improving this is great.

Great novel with alot of potential, yes there are cliché plot scenarios but not as much as you would think.

This book is very interesting so far binged read it really couldn't put it down❤️

I think the book is amazing personally...Read it you might like itAnd give ratings ,like ,comment and add to you library too

Though there are minor problems such as repeated use of words and some slightly confusing sentences it is overall readable. The story is good, and the characters are simplistic but real. I wouldn't pack the words like a big essay paragraph, so I think it would be a great improvement if you fix the text formatting! Good luck fellow Author!

Rather than just baseless smut, the author created a book with a story here.I'm still halfway, but so far, I'm loving the interactions and pleasant pacing of the book.

Hello, I'm Tyrouge.This is going to be my first original work on this platform and I hope to gain your support, make it an enjoyable read for you.So, If you like it, please send power stones, reviews, comments and if I get a contract, Golden tickets and gifts.If you have any questions regarding the story, please leave them here, I'll reply as soon as I can.

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