Villain: Gouging Out the Heroine’s Spiritual Eyes at the Beginning

Legit jus a big mess so many problems1. Inconsistent with names he switches the names of the ice girl so much and the sword like how can’t you remeber this. He also uses the wrong name for the eyes saying sharigan a lot 2. Power system is jus dumb he can fight and kill a peak c rank but struggles against a D rank dummy keep in mind he’s like E rank during this and he fought a main character fine as a E- rank while they were D rank so like what3. He jus gets new powers all the time. He jus gets stuff and doesn’t even have like a fighting style tbh he jus does whatever like he uses a katana and its supposed to be like quick and wtv and then he gets telekinesis and starts using daggers and besides that he also jus gets a nine tailed fox out of no where and people jus are fine with it not even questioning how he got it if he’s disowned and supposedly untalented enough to be disowned.4. Next thing is no back story all we know is he is disowned fir being untalented but he improves as if he has no bad talent and as far as i know he doesn’t drink anything besides the mana potion that boosts his talent to grow that much5. Characters jus hate him for some reason and from the looks of it it’s because he got disowned and they jus interact in a boring rigid unrealistic way like ice girl can be struggling to do telekinesis and then jus fight perfectly fine with it in the next paragraph As long as you can close your eyes and mind this novel is fine but besides that it’s jus words and shit legit nothing makes sense and there’s no real story line jus random things to keep it going

I dont get why you added reincarnation in this novel if the guy who got reincarnated  will just be a stone i mean he will do nothing  and act like one of those temperamental and trashy anoying system also if you read the story from the pov of stone guy it gives ntr and voy**er vibes also the rei guy acts like a 3rd rate  trashy  villian with 2 brain cells and  common senses  of a donkey and the reincarnated  guy does nothing more than tell him to eat vegetables  and makes convenience items like toilets and what not and i am not some professional  author or somthing but this just feels like you are writing  on the fly without  planning  enything over all trashy novel with trashy character

recommended if you have great patience and has high tolerance for stupidity, moreover mental strength to to take in the reason for his stupidity, i couldn't take on the stupidity so skipped to chap 57 and couldnt take that reason so i drooped it, but it maybe for you

Bang!!! Bang!!

Both spell collided, but the shockwave is bigger than I thought and the cloak that covered my face was unveiled.

A mix of pleasure and pain jolted them.

As Young Master Gu Zhi asked his question, the door to his room opened and two men carrying a small child with a bag over its head, entered, "Young Master, forgive these slaves, but the other women managed to escape somehow..." These guards were rather worried. The Young Master was known to get angry when his playthings escaped.

(makes sense then how you determine how many points i get when i level up?)