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CosmicCeaser
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- July 1,2024
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Hey, u know Author, that everything is OP, so why not 3chap everyday, I am getting bored😣
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**Review from Chapter 1 to 26** This novel is about Reinst who hated her life because her family is disappointed by her gender, weak mana, and dark attribute. In short, no one loves her so she just decided to become a cell donor to at least be helpful after she dies. Coincidentally, she dies later on that same day by a... meteorite (sponsored by God's idiocy). Reinst then reincarnated 7 years later as Lyra. She finally experiences the wonderful love of a family but she still has her fears because of her past life. She also gets troubled as she meets people she knew as Reinst especially her half-brother who got suspicious of her.I Didn't Even Want to Live, But God Forced Me to Reincarnate! (phew) is another reincarnation cliché novel but it has its own twists. It's really interesting and has its humor. I recommend readers trying this!I'm only having problems with info-dumps. The info-dumps are either (1) unnecessary, it's not really important to the plot (2) necessary but it's like a storm that points out all the infos in one shot. I might need the info given out but I don't need it now nor everything of it all at once. For example: the infos about different races.Apart from that, the author is doing really great! I'm looking forward to the chapters and your improvement! Good luck and have fun! (^_^)/
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You know something funny when I read your description my first thought was the AVATAR 💁🏾u200d♀️💁🏾u200d♀️💁🏾u200d♀️☺️ sorry it just sounded kind similar I like your synopsis. You have an intriguing story here something different and rare, very interesting I like it.
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Hey dear author Your book resonated deeply with me, and I'm convinced it can inspire many more readers. I'd love to share some ideas on how to expand its reach and amplify its impact.May I have the privilege of discussing my thoughts with you?
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Need more intense mature and sexual scene. But the comedy is alright as well as what is written on the romance part so far.
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compelling coming of age novel that shows vibrant campus life.Its rich in social struggles,romance(still gauging it)I think the strength lies in its well crafted characters
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The beginning of the novel is good. Your approach of making the introduction(chapter 0) philosophical is intriguing.As I read further, I found the build up to be good too, even though I thought some things were odd, but that didn't affect the quality and flow. The scenes are interesting and that seems to be your strongest point so far, like, you are very good at writing moments. The problem I had in the middle is how much of it was "filler". A decent bit of it was character information and skill information (system time) that didn't really move things ahead but rather slowed them down and broke my immersion.I can't say much about the character design since there's not much to go off of. Most of the beginning was action and it's in the most recent chapters that you started showing his initial disposition. I guess we'll see...
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first time reading this novel and I must say, i am impressed! A friend told me about it and week ago and I forgot to read it so i decided to check it out today and yes I've read all the chapters! This would be great as a show on Disney or Netflix NGL. keep writing because we need more of this!
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Adam and Eve would be proud to stand near this God's Tree. That says it all, my brethren! Dig in! Good novel!
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Her book is not bad . Love how she keeps to update and are characters are an interesting combination and the interesting twist of transmigration in a werewolf book is something on its own!!!!!!!!Good job Author 👍 Will read more ....
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I just finished reading your book, and I have to say, it’s absolutely fantastic! I truly enjoyed it. I’d love to offer a few tips that might help boost the performance and visibility of your book even more. I believe these could take your work to the next level
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I dont get why you added reincarnation in this novel if the guy who got reincarnated will just be a stone i mean he will do nothing and act like one of those temperamental and trashy anoying system also if you read the story from the pov of stone guy it gives ntr and voy**er vibes also the rei guy acts like a 3rd rate trashy villian with 2 brain cells and common senses of a donkey and the reincarnated guy does nothing more than tell him to eat vegetables and makes convenience items like toilets and what not and i am not some professional author or somthing but this just feels like you are writing on the fly without planning enything over all trashy novel with trashy character
Reincarnation: My Love and Loathing for the Villain