The Hidden Queen Returns

wow...just wow I really underestimated this novel I thought it will be full of cliche but it really proved me wrong. I advise everyone to read this if I had lots of friends I would've suggested  this.

not bad fanfiction, I would even say good, but as for me, the author needs to devote more time to mc, and although the story is just beginning, our mc has become a force, but compared to creatures in space, he is a weakling and cannon fodder, albeit at a high level. Dear author, please tell us more about magic, etc. Even now it can be compared to the whole universe, but I think magic can surprise and at least give him more opportunities, as well as the fact that he travels through different worlds and universes , as for me, it is necessary to take away interesting forces besides souls , and although I understand which is already very difficult to write at the moment, because our mc is almost omnipotent, but please let him start using the laws more often. Also, please ask the author to come up with a normal name Mc, otherwise void is not very cool for me, but not very much, as a person who reads this with a translation from English to Russian, I say it's a real trifle to come up with a name for a demon. It's also worth giving go more interesting slaves, and as for me, a little more cruelty to him, otherwise sometimes he does shit that makes me want to cry tears of blood. I understand that the author wants to diversify the plot and not make the mc completely cold and aloof From everything , but the mc should not be made stupid. He could have avoided some problems if he had shown great cruelty , but there's nothing to be done about it , so to speak, it 's the author's will , as well as about the gods and I would like you to explain the difference in their powers, Their + and their - as far as I understand, there is an energy of faith and I would see if mc could create faith in himself and become a god? Anyway, I've given the author a couple of ideas here, so let him decide for himself. In general, come out with chapters more often and I'll definitely finish reading the whole top! The author also holds on to good inspiration.

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It's a cool place and they say it gets colder

My world's on fire, how about yours?

Gin looked around confused slightly. His nose burned as a horrible smell filled his nostrils causing it to twitch. "Gross!" He snapped covering his nose instinctively.

"Yeah, it always is. That new game just got released too, so the gaming section will probably be even more packed," Raul replied. "Normally I would be all on that, but today is important."