Lara's revenge is a powerful book..read with keen interest and watch as it unfold

Interesting work, I like the theme of Yandere's (SUPER FÃ) and he delivers that, it is also interesting the fact that the work is addressing another subject more slowly which is the [Yandere Factor] for now I will continue reading and see how it ends.

I don't typically read stories like this. I was scrolling and the words caught my attention. This will most definitely be an Author I will earn for more stories from. ❤️

In an app completely over saturated with “super-level this” and cannon-fodder that”, this is a great breath of fresh air. Truly interesting female characters, main protagonist with actual hurdles and flaws, and a world I’m pretty dang excited to explore.

Hey, Author's here!Although I am the author of this novel, I will still rate this story 4.4 for myself as I know that it's my first time writing a novel and mistakes are bound to happen. I will try my best to prevent making too many mistakes, so do support me.Do leave a review for this one if you are reading, I might not reply to them, but I will still read them and take them into considerationI don't mind bad reviews, as they will become my learning point, for my next novel, if I tried to write one.This novel will be slow paced in the start as I am still building the Foundation for the story, so bear with it. I will only update one chapter daily for the time being, as writing and editing one chapter a day is my limit right now.Thankyou~

y'all should read this book. I love it sm

Kinda cliche not that I dislike that. I just wish the mc wasn’t someone’s summoned creature kinda also usually when something evolves it evolves into something more powerful in that category of monsters or whatever unless influenced by something. The mc however when from a slime to and explosive slime which is ok then straight to a wraith lmao kinda a weird development idk.

Amazing book I like the story line You are doing amazing work author keep it up

This novel hits hard. It opens with Devon reminiscing about the good old days hammocks, flower beds, and Sophie’s first kiss. It’s this warm, nostalgic setup that contrasts beautifully with the chaos that follows. You nailed the emotional shift, from longing for peace to the brutal reality of what Devon’s facing.The sibling dynamic? Pure gold. Devon and Kisho’s banter felt alive, their bond grounding the chapter with humor before the trial. That ear yank? Chef’s kiss. It’s playful and light, making what happens next hit even harder.Then the trial starts, and it’s a gut punch. Devon’s desperation, his raw anger, and the betrayal he feels from the villagers are so visceral. The way he fakes his way through magic? Genius. You’re rooting for him, even knowing it’s not going to end well.And when the father reveals his true colors? Chilling. His sanctimonious speech, the crowd’s roar, and Devon’s brief triumph with magic all build perfectly to that brutal twist. His death and transformation into the abyss felt like a tidal wave of anger and raw power. Devon’s vow for revenge? Goosebumps.Kisho’s a tsun tsun Brocon, but his relationship with Devon adds so much to the emotional weight. Jideva’s ominous twist at the end seals it. The question of whether Devon will rise above his hatred or become consumed by it is the perfect hook.

A system that isn't isekai! I did not expect that! I wonder what is gonna happen and can poor author it up where water is hard to articulate long term without hitting some sort of dead end. I agree with some of those others where it is creative and fun, but how will Rain evolve as a person in this aquatic world I am giving it ten across the board because they are braver than anything I am to make such a story.

I am not a fan of FLs who act like they are a damsel in distress, could not say No to toxic men and are attracted to them.

good book let the good work continue and update the story as soon as possible