The Elementals Chronicles

Honest review: In my opinion, this novel has good story development, character design, and world-building — simple yet unique... The writing quality isn’t a problem either... Even though this novel isn’t my type, I started enjoying it after a few chapters... But the only problem is that your chapters are short and the pacing feels a bit fast... I hope you can improve that part...Glory! x'D

So far absolutely amazing I love the world and fight scenes. Its really well made I think sometimes the chapters are kinda short though thats my only complain though

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It has potential to be something great but currently it lacks depth. The interpersonal relationships are a bit shallow, the title is "Reborn as the villainess's knight" there has been no significant development with her or what his earlier relationship was with her either. I feel like the academy arc should've been delayed a bit and his recovery and what happened to him after he was rescued should've been expanded a bit more cause tbh at this point I don't feel much connection to anybody in the story. The MC needs some personality, aspirations, flaws for us to care about him. The world building has had a lot of thought put into it and the character designs/powers are nice. This is all just my opinion tho and I hope this turns into something great.

This novel is good.But Man... there are lots of misunderstandings in this novel. Worst one was chapter 317. Why did do this author?? I mean seriously??I hope you will resolve it and handle it properly. I would be annoying if misunderstandings spawn because of this one. Besides, you have already created a cockroach(Mastermind behind mc's murder).

And all that glitters is gold

Matthew suddenly stopped and called out for Harridan. "Boss! The footsteps end here"

Is this really happening?