nice but do some more improvement and than you can give can get best result

.The plot twists in this story are insane! Just when I think I have it figured out, something new happens. Loving it!Romance, action, and mystery all wrapped up in a beautifully written story. This is a hidden gem!"

Setting and world building are well described, and the pace is fast.Please continue to write the chapters, will be waiting to read more. You will do well!

Best book i ever came acrosss, can't wait till new chapters come out, the into is fire puts the reader in another world. Reading this book makes time fly but the emotions that you get from reading is priceless. To the person who wrote this: man idk how you make this masterpeace but keep on doing it you have a great talent

I like how the MC is playing different characters,and I’m always interested in how the author will continue in writing gods.Also I can’t wait to see what will happen to the MC about his lost memories.

This is a shameless review but this story is like a fine wine and the more you read the more chapter you will want to continue... Trust me, you won’t just love it—you’ll need it.Let me break it down:1-The Action: Battles so intense, you'll feel your pulse race faster than Akira dodging a dungeon boss.2-Humor That Kills ( will be shown way later when he gets his character changing: Literally. Akira’s taunts are so good they might as well be classified as a weapon.3-Heartfelt Moments: Beneath the sass and the battles, this story has an emotional core that hits hard. Akira’s journey isn’t just about revenge—it’s about finding his place in a broken world. 4-The Plot Twists: Think you’ve seen it all? Nope. The surprises in this story will leave your jaw on the floor.

The characters here are pretty interesting. The story and how it's progressing so far is great. It was well written too. Hope u finish this author san.

Hey, Author's here!Although I am the author of this novel, I will still rate this story 4.4 for myself as I know that it's my first time writing a novel and mistakes are bound to happen. I will try my best to prevent making too many mistakes, so do support me.Do leave a review for this one if you are reading, I might not reply to them, but I will still read them and take them into considerationI don't mind bad reviews, as they will become my learning point, for my next novel, if I tried to write one.This novel will be slow paced in the start as I am still building the Foundation for the story, so bear with it. I will only update one chapter daily for the time being, as writing and editing one chapter a day is my limit right now.Thankyou~

⭐⭐⭐⭐Great story with intriguing twists. The pacing is good, and the lore behind Ravenswood Academy is fascinating. Some parts felt a bit slow, but overall, a fantastic read.

hi this is DE 😃. I'm a new author that just start writing last month, I wrote this novel to learn and try to seek as much experience as possible. I would be grateful if you read and liked this novel by high schoolers (I'm 17 💀). Relax, this novel doesn't tell trash shounen like anime or other wet dream novels. thank you 😘

Surprisingly good story so far. Excited to see where it goes. and yes the forbidden app led me here. Keep up the good work.  .........

writing quality: If not for a few strange sentences here and there that don't really make sense as they are or have a logical issue, i would give this 6 stars. that's not possible, but i still want to express how much i like the way it's written. it feels just as immersive as the many books on my shelf. it also really fits the overall mood and world.story development: i haven't reached very far, but it heavily reminds me of plenty of royal romance face slapping webtoons, only that there's no romance, but honestly, i don't even miss it! reading it is simply satisfying.character design: i can't complain much. The characters are unique, and there isn't an overload of useless characters, meaning each introduced character has a clear role and is easily distinguished. the reason i only gave 4 stars here is that they aren't described much, which makes it a bit hard to be sure what they're supposed to look like.updating stability: I have no clue as i haven't caught up yet. Enjoy the free 5 stars, author!world background: i love the vibes, and i love the setting. it's not anything no one else has thought of before, but there's a healthy amount of "unusual" combinations, which, in turn, make it feel fresh and lift it from the masses.personal notes: If you want to see the protagonist fight and struggle, this novel isn't for you. the hardships already happened, so he's now on a face slapping spree, easily making all the villains miserable and coughing up blood (not quite so dramatic in the novel, that's just me). but if you like that, go for this novel!