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ntww12
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support more for your best plz support and wait for more stories novel get ready and I'm waiting .for your review .           yoai yoai πŸ’«
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TheEyePatch rated it THE MASKED HEART
May 14,2025
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Oh my god, I have been wanting this typa story(Filler for comment)CHCVCVCsajc    jhwdb xjhx HCVSC GHCQ HQVWHQHWGCVDHGDCCVSHGCSCVSHACAJHVSHJVHJVSDUCJDCDJACHVACCVGHCVV
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TheEyePatch rated it Bonnies deadly escape
May 14,2025
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Hi, Author here...I'm writing an honest review here. This is my third work, and to be honest, I wrote this novel as just a fun and relaxing debauched vampire novel because of my liking for MVS. There's nothing much to expect from it for the plot maniacs. It's written in the first person pov, so it might be a little weird when reading it. furthermore, the plot progression is super sluggish (remember, I wrote it for fun.)And lastly, I can guarantee you good mid-tier grammar that won't make your brain steam.
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I've only read a few chapters so far, but from what I see this novel has a lot of potential, good writing, and sweet dialogue so far, author please keep up the good work, I really hope you can bring out the potential of this novel πŸ’―πŸ’―πŸ’―
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TheEyePatch rated it Ringings of the heart
May 13,2025
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I haven't read a novel that has made me laugh this hard in a long time. not since I read Young Masters POV. honestly, peak comedy. my only complaint is that, though the writing quality is good, the story's structure is... how should I say this... somewhat feels incomplete. what do I mean? u might wonder. the first-person POV is not giving the story enough depth. the story focuses too much on the main character's POV, and in doing so, it makes other characters lack depth and makes the story bland. like now in his class, there are only 7 main students, and the more u read into the story, the more u will start to  believe that there are only 7 students in his class. I mean, at a point during the survival camp arc, he completely forgot to add Garrick and Cassandra and added them to some chapter layer as if they were there from the start. and that's the main cast. moving to other characters unless he's talking to them or mentions them, we know next to nothing about their lives or what they are plotting. plus foreshadowing doesn't work well with first-person POV, that's why authors third person and other povs, to add more depth into their novel's world and give the readers something to look forward to. I hope the author will address this issue, and trust me, the novel will become one of my favourites. for now, though it's  really funny, I won't call it a really good novel, Average at best, but has potential. it's still early for the author to fix this problem.
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TheEyePatch rated it The Elementals Chronicles
May 12,2025
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So far absolutely amazing I love the world and fight scenes. Its really well made I think sometimes the chapters are kinda short though thats my only complain though
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hey there i have been reading your fanfic and it has such a good story so i would like to know if you are interested in publishing this fanfic to my novel group and worry not we will pay you 4 to 5 dollars per thousand views and your can bring more views from other platforms and the more views your novel chapters have the more money you have so if you are interested please contact me on instagram or on discord My Instagram ID is yurichi_adrenaline and My discord Username is earth_19998  so please consider my offer one time and maybe this collaboration will change your whole life thank you
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100/10 can’t wait to read the rest I need this novel in my life PLEASE
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I like transmigrated story! and this story is a captivating blend of fantasy and romance, with unique worlds and complex characters that keep readers hooked from start to finish.
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TheEyePatch rated it Mortal God of Blacksmith
May 11,2025
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good story,             please keep it up
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TheEyePatch rated it Binary Blood
May 11,2025
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I like the story so much l am waiting for next episode and all best for to achieve what you want even I like the characters you have put in the story and concepts are nice
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TheEyePatch rated it Crashing Hearts
May 10,2025
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Read the first three chapters and can say that it has quite a lot of potential considering it's twist on the isekai genre although the mc's character is bit too god for my sake but still give it a read.
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