The Body Thief

Interesting story cause now I’d recommend it

So, good effort. Fair warning, I've only read to about chapter 27.My thoughts on this...I hate the time skips and the character is jumping around all these places, it's very irrational. Unfortunately, before any side characters can be fleshed out or even any situation can be fleshed out properly the scene is changed and then the MC is doing something else.The world is never really fleshed out, I know the author says there are 3 huge continents and you HAVE to go to the academy in order to get a certificate to get in a dungeon... We also know that the police will allow an 11 year old 'healer' to go into a hostage situation with no knowledge of his skills other than that he can cast a powerful heal spell.... had me scratching my head at this version of the police who would allow this based on an 11 year old HEALER saying 'Trust me'.Then suddenly the author brings religion into it and they are calling him a 'saint'. Honestly, it reads like the author wasn't sure what they wanted to do and kept deciding to change it around as he went.Also, even though it's called 'Healing System' and his class is a 'Healer' it still seems like the author is taking it down the road of the MC being a warrior/sniper (or similar) with 'healing ability'. (I've only read to about chapter 27 though)I do NOT want to discourage the author. Even though I am dropping it, I wanted to give the author this feedback so that they can improve on these things. There is only so much disbelief you can ask a reader to do before they are pulled out of a story.I recommend slowing the pace down and fleshing out the world and the MC. You can still have him move around, but there should be more descriptions and backstory on why things are the way they are. Unless it's just a video game he's stuck in there should be a reason. (And most game developers try to add a reason in as well).

Didn't make sense not to live for fun

Fed to the rules and I hit the ground running

Description

Your wish entails that you will be transported in 'The gamer universe'. Along with your gamer skill, we took upon ourselves to give you an apartment which is paid for the month and we also decided to give you the knowledge to understand and speak korean, that's right your in Korea.

"Sorry, how I wish I was there with you but I can't. My work is very demanding and there are things that I need to do," she said with a gloomy sigh. She's been working too hard, and I'm getting worried for her sake.

Very good novel, keep it up please……………