Amazing really fun and interesting world!                                                                                                               

Guys a well written book about it I’m kinda enjoying it ngl

story is okay not very special but it had great potential i want to see what happened next

"정교하게 빚어진 명작"이 소설은 매력적인 스토리텔링과 몰입감 넘치는 세계관, 그리고 탄탄한 캐릭터들이 어우러진 진정한 예술 작품입니다. 우아하면서도 강렬한 문체는 자연스럽게 흐르며, 모든 장면을 생생하게 만들어 줍니다. 전개는 탁월하게 조율되어 있어 액션, 감정, 긴장감이 완벽한 균형을 이룹니다. 모든 디테일이 치밀하게 구성되어 있으며, 독자를 압도하지 않으면서도 이야기의 깊이를 더욱 풍성하게 만듭니다. 풍부한 분위기와 강렬한 서사를 갖춘 이 작품은 뛰어난 스토리텔링과 몰입감 있는 세계관을 좋아하는 독자들에게 꼭 추천하고 싶은 소설입니다.

Pertamax 😎📖🥇 Thanks for the Books!!!!! 😆 📖🍻Oh, nobody else have given a review for this aside from the author? Let me be the first reader to give all five stars for all five categories for your new book 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟 We are all looking forward for the next chapters 🥰📖🍷

Reader please and please read this novel you will be thrilled.

i always think when i hear "i will protect the people i care about" in novels, animes, etc..as long as there is no people you care about except yourself by protdcting yourself doesn't that mean you protcted the people you care about(yourself)seriously why bother caring about so many people and protecting them everyone is a human that know how to take care of themselves if they couldn't protect themselves it's their fault why task yourself with protecting then

This novel captivated my heart.Iam expecting more twist in the story...love it...

Chapter 1  is a fantastic start.  You've established a unique premise with Hengsheng's unexpected system power, setting the stage for an exciting, unconventional cultivation journey.  The initial scene in the Endless Void, showcasing the struggle between transcendent beings, is captivating and  immediately immerses the reader in this world's grand scale. Hengsheng's initial despair after being declared spirit coreless is very relatable, and you've effectively conveyed the emotional impact of his situation.  His determination and resilience shine through, especially in his interaction with his mother.  The pacing of the chapter is excellent, gradually building the suspense leading up to the reveal of Hengsheng's system power.  The "Ding! [Make a wish]" moment is both intriguing and promising, leaving the reader eager to discover the possibilities of this system.

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Was enjoying the story quite a bit and finished chapter 48/49 yesterday looking forward to today's chapter only to find it and the chapters i already read after chap 40 locked. With several other locked stories with hundreds of chaps left it is a real turn off. Discontinuing until they are finished in about 600+ days. Goodbye until then or the locks are removed

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