Found your link on Twitter since and since I like to check out new material for my YouTube channel that I am working on, I wanted to check this out.Not too bad so far man, just keep things slow and steady.  I cant express to you how mad it makes me when someone is writing a great story, then BOOM they get impatient with the pacing and make their MC go from weak to extremely OP.  PLEASE do NOT do that, and I think you will have a great piece of literature on your hands.  Best of luck, ill be keeping tabs on this!

Damn, I Don't Know Im'mSo Drawn To This. It's Really Straight Forward  Easy To Follow N An Urban Fantasy. Damn. I Like It

Is this harem? Also amazing novel, like the system and comedy.

Hi Everyone,To those who have read my other work, The whole plot of this book is completely different from the previous book, if Sugar Mommy was a cheeky Easter Fantasy Book then The Eternal Gambit is a Western Fantasy Book that is a mixture of everything I have learned while writing till now. The story is about a plain young man who gave up being a human to live once more. if you have any doubts use this review as a thread to clear them, i will do my best to clear what i can

keep it up ✌️🫡😁as a fellow yorùbá guy you tried buh you still have room for improvement

let's go , go get her into a threesome already .

this is refreshing and very hilarious. I used to be in an isekai, where the character transmigrated to a villain's body and everything, but this is new. you will laugh how anytime the mc freaks out being reincarnated to Victorian era lol

I was a fan of the old novel as well. And I read this novel till chapter 201 so far and really liked it as it is a big improvement. This novel isn't perfect but I really liked it. Firstly, the writing quality is top notch. No spelling mistakes, no grammatical mistakes and I personally like it a lot. This blends into combat scenes that are also written very well. It isn't anything revolutionary but the battle scenes are amazing.Secondly, character design. The character design is realistic, though of course slightly fantastical, and just super well done. I did think that some of the girls didn't make much sense to fall for the MC, but after reading more I trust that the author will tie it all in very well.Thirdly, the world background is very interesting and there is a lot of stuff and lore to explore. It is just a very immersive and interesting world I want to read more about.Finally, really good update stability.Now, one of the things I did not like as much about the novel was that the pace was a bit off. It slowed down quite a lot compared to the previous novel which I thought was nice, but at the same time, it felt fast. Just not a big fan of the pacing imo, but everything else is well done.Minor spoilers below:Finally, an MC that isn't an edgelord killing people for fun or having no emotions. This new MC is a breath of fresh air in this platform that I really love. Not only that, he is a very smart MC who is capable of playing high level mind games that I enjoy. I think that the thing author does with hiding MC's thoughts can be annoying, especially when it came to one of the female lead's, cause its hard to understand the MC's true thoughts, but I still loved it. The MC in this novel is a big upgrade.Overall rating: around 8.5-9/10 so far in my opinion. I don't read much on this platform but I loved reading this novel.

Hai, I'm Mrs. O, thank you for reading this story. I hope you can leave a review to help improve my work in the future. I've entered this story in the WSA contest, so please help me by collecting this book and supporting it with power stones so it can get some promotion. Any kindness from you will mean so much to me! Thank You :)

Interesting story cause now I’d recommend it

It was a good piece of writing. It would be nice if there is no lock and the updates are good.I am waiting for more updates.It would be nice if you staged a coup d'état, declared yourself Napoleon, created a version of Napoleon's laws adapted to the world you have built and declared a revolution.It would be very cool if he sent the head of his family to the rival duke. That would be a neat cause for war. He can also be allied with the family where his sister is.Also, it would be nice if the troops you   Finally, it would be nice if you introduce the family coat of arms and flag;  And then add a change to the flag with the symbols of the revolution.If you read this, I wish you the continuation and quality of your work, Mr. Author. call are suitable for the colors of your household. This prevents the units from becoming rainbows.

This is a gem!!!! i stumbled upon it a month ago and I must say it's a fantastic read that leaves you thirsting for more. Good job author-sama 💕💕