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Everything is great about this book, However the MC is on the extreme end of the spectrum. He got a system that turns him into a vampire, he researches about vampires, he then acts as if the system is just him hallucinating. The MC is sooo stupid your brain cells will kamikaze each other just from reading his thought process and actions. Since this story is in a futuristic setting, I hope MC finds something to cure his extreme brain cell seppuku soon. Of course this is only my review for the first 20ish chapters, if my brain cells survive to the point where MC has the IQ higher than a retarded squirrel I will update. TLDR Character -9999/10

I hope the author/moderator doesn't delete comments that give true and real feedback, simply because it's not to their liking. Because it takes time and effort to give constructive feedback. I've seen them do it too often. And the only 120+ reviews have me wondering if that's the case, especially for a novel with 3+ mil views👀.The concept of the novel is very good as it combines my favorite novel The Ultimate Evolution with the concept of doomsday/world ascension. World ascension is a novel type I really like after reading Battle of Ascension and to have it combined with the concept of my favorite novel had me hyped. It was to the extent that I had a novel idea after reading Ultimate Evolution and Terror Infinity a few years ago but with the aspect of History being the driver... but I guess this novel already used it 🤷u200d♂️. So it's no doubt that I like the concept.But this one is really disappointing. The MC's mentality is way too Beta and the novel too rushed. It's not a matter of speed leveling or the like, but that way too many instances are skipped or just barely glossed over which leaves readers confused. These don't make the novel "drop worthy" at least not for me because I love this type of novel, but it's still very confusing and very disappointing nonetheless.WQ 4/5: Very good writing quality if you ask me.SD 3/5: The beginning or at least after DD happens, the story seems overly rushed. Some may say that skipping some growth segments are obvious and deem it ok or at least it's not bad. But this kind of SD makes the novel very confusing. Half the time things are happening but I wonder why it's happening at all. It's like plots just come jumping out at you. So it's difficult to follow.CD 2/5: This is one of the worst CD I have ever seen tbh. It's already 80 chapters into the novel yet the MC is still as Beta as the first 5 chapters. He is still crying about morality every other chapter which makes it so difficult to read and very repetitive. Not to mention him constantly grasping unto the leg of the girl who is clearly using him... at least to me she is using him.UD 5/5: Best thing about the novel. 24+ chapters per week is really great, especially if you like this novel.WB 3/5: It's not terrible and it's not great. This ties in either the rushed SD from above. Because the SD is so rushed, after 80 chapters in, all I know about the WB is that it's some futuristic earth and the one city he stays in or around.... and of the 2 dungeons he entered.

This novel is absolutely phenomenal!Each character has such intricate details, and the author does a really good job portraying their individual personalities! (And the “Pokémon-catching” of MC’s lovers honestly isn’t as cringingly quick as most novels, and it is somewhat sensible.)The backstory of the main character & his sister was pulled off really well, and the MC’s & Layla’s subsequent resulting personalities have legitimate justification.1. Amazing writing quality! Hardly any grammatical errors.2. Pretty good update stability! It’s pretty stable, I just wish there was more! 😆3. The story development is AMAZING!!! It really develops well.4. Character design is perhaps one of the BEST aspects! I already mentioned a bit about this, but the way that the MC deals with emotions (not knowing what emotions are, or what he feels) is really well-done! And the character development of othe characters is great, too, but I won’t talk about it, lol.5. World background is alright. It’s a bit confusing about how a “purge” would even come about, and how the President could possibly sign something that turns the purge permanent forever, but I just put that under “alternate earth” logic! 😂(Because, I mean, even the Constitution get an amendment ratified - such as the 21st amendment of the Constitution, which repealed the 18th amendment, the amendment that banned the sale/manufacture of alcohol - Prohibition was repealed!)Lol, anyway, that bit of legislative logic can be filed under “it’s just a story!” 😂

The first three reincarnated chance i can still enjoy it but after that the author obviously forgot what the novel title is, it suddenly chance to a generic wuxia novel, really what kind of fckng arc takes more than a hundred chapter?! you should just make a new novel!! so fkng dissapointing, some say that this novel is plagiarizing Worldwide simulation era but imo this is just a trash copy!!

Incredible amazing this is the most beautiful and interesting apocalyptic novel so far. If Yes, I understand someone that like apocalyptic novel no need searching here is the bus 🚌 stop 🚏.  Long live our Author

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Spoiler Alert.Author,The rest of the chapter is good.But After that chapter when Betty kissed Andrea,it gave a bad taste to me(Light NTR).Even though it aint being done with a Man. I Hope that kind of thing aint happening anymore in the upcoming chapter.

A very enjoyable novel. Thank You!!  The story is fastpace and it is fun to read. :)xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx