The story is good, specially the first 5 chaps so far. also the world background and characters are also amazing with there being hell and Lucifer and stuff and of course the system also🔥 But I guess the grammar needs a bit more polishing, but doesn’t really affect much in the story😊 So I’ll give it a 4.8 hehe

Hello, Everyone! I am the author of The Unrivaled Holder: Rise of the Dragon Monarch. Serve this thread as a Q&A portion. If you are planning on reading this, you might experience info dump between chapter 1-11, because I wrote this one way back 2022 and that time, I felt like it was necessary. Lmao. But do not worry tho, because it changes when chapter 12 started. It is kinda fast paced as well. If you are not fan of fast paced book, this book ain’t for you. Lastly. if you find this book good, or just decent, please vote for it!  I promise you that you will experience fresh plots especially on the later chaps. Thanks a bunch and stay hydrated!

I liked the detail of the story and keeps me intrigued i cant wait for future chapters. The story has just started and the way it just absorbs you and you want to keep reading.waiting for future chapters

I haven’t read many system novels, but I can say that this is one of the best I’ve read so far. I’m not familiar with cultivation tropes and the terms used, but the author made sure to break it down in a way that it’s easy to understand. The novel is also set in a futuristic setting, adding a layer of complexity to the story.I highly recommend ❤️🔥

i liked this novel as this follows solo leveling theme, also, the mc is really op. and the idea that everyone is awaken from the birth is pretty funny 🤣 because it leads to so many possibilities such as hunter school, etc. which sounds cool. but I didn't like the lenghthof each chapter  it is really short

Hello great author, I'm a huge fan of your work! Your book left a lasting impression on me, and I believe it has the potential to reach even more readers. I'd be honored to share some thoughts on how to enhance its impact and visibility. Would you be open to hearing my thoughts?

"I absolutely love the world-building, the depth of the characters, the perfect pacing, and the engaging dialogue—it all weaves together into an unforgettable experience!"

Author i request you not to drop this , keep going as much as you can. Don't stop.

the book is going on the way of becoming a masterpiece ....I request the author make it a peak level masterpiece for us....

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please rate it.  I need to know whether it's good or not.  please leave review. Both good or bad 🥺😭😭

I've always wanted to read a pure football novel with realistic gameplay and without any stealing abilities, cheat scifi or fantasy and this just might be it only issue I have with the novel is with starting in a unknown team in an unknown league but I would say the game management is spot on as a aspiring writer I understand hwo hard it is to keep consistency while trying to attract readers which is why I would be rating it a 4.4