Absolute Cinema...I need to double check to read the grammar of this book but so far, so good!You're definitely reminding me of some author in our country! Plus, how you combined the sound effects and the poetic rhythm, it's just peak fiction. 8 chapters in, totally invested.Just go on and chase your drems bro!The writing is just peak fiction!

Dear Author,Though I haven't read all the chapters yet, but so far it's actually nice. I like the authors originality with his work considering how this is my first time reading with this kind of content, moreover it's not really as often you would find a novel where the MC is a father. I think this also adds to his character. Anyways I love it so I'm gonna finish the rest of the chapters now (u2060｡u2060•̀u2060ᴗu2060-u2060)u2060✧Sincerely, Loki

A truly amazing novel! The events are thrilling, and the writing style is enjoyable and smooth. I loved it so much and can't wait for more

An amazing story that has very realistic character portrayals, along with a unique and excellent writing style. The pacing may be faster than what some would enjoy, along with the MC getting power extremely quickly, however, that doesn't take away from the enthralling storytelling the Author has done with the book. The world itself; while still in the early stages as of the time I'm writing this review (chapter 55), has not disappointed, and offers unique power structures and countries.So far, the updates have been very stable, and I must applaud the Author for their commitment to writing this amazing story, can't wait to read more!

pure bliss it's a feast for my eyes I would really like to thanks the author for such a beautiful story and I'll be looking forward to this beautiful story to be published

Good Story . I like the story, too bad the update cahpater is not fast enough. I wait to read

What a great book sat down and read every chapter that was free. Amazing writing excellent world building this will be a gem just watch! The way the power up is goes against everything I read so far and it is only the beginning! Every character introduced has a story and builds with the main character!

I'm really enjoying this story, it's got comedy in it, and sultry teasing between some of the characters, with really great choreographed action scenes.I have snorted at a lot of silly things written here, and also been on edge waiting for what happens next on the action side of things.The story is full of interesting characters like a very lovable giant crab that says so much with such little vocabulary. The hero, which the crab steals the show, but he's awesome too with his quips and banter between everyone including his great friendship with his crab.There are other really fun characters but I don't want to spoil it, but their relationship is something else!The writer does an amazing job updating daily and sometimes you even get 2 or 3 chapters that day which are great reads. Give it a try!

"Eclipsed By Fate":The language used in the novel is both evocative and engaging. The author skillfully employs descriptive imagery that paints vivid scenes, allowing readers to visualize the settings and emotions of the characters.

The writing so far has been good as of chapter 7 and I have been enjoying the story a lot. Its lore is interesting so far with still a lot of unanswered questions that I look forward to seeing.  The antagonist currently (Serpent Deceit/Anguis) is very interesting for the first villain of the novel. The pacing has been really good! It’s not too fast and not too slow which makes reading this much easier for me than most novels. The two main characters aren’t too generic or cliched and the side characters are also cool. Loving it so far. Keep cooking 🔥

So far it’s good, keep up the good work, looking forward to seeing more

This shit was pretty good until it went all "gods everywhere" bullshit and starting spewing all this random god crap. Drop it all and go back to the Urban Plundering part. We don't need all this extra bullshit to make you feel like a real author. Just give us what we want.