The Angry Man (volume-1)

a história e muito boa, uma leitura agradável!

"I agree." Steve said, "We can find them after we deal with Ultron. We still don't know what he wants to accomplish. He says he needs a body to complete his mission, but what mission is that, exactly?"

I have read the first few chapters and I can say is that the story is very interesting to read. Though I am not sure of the writing quality as it could use a little better. I highly suggest to use grammarly to improve your writing quality. All in all it has a firm plot and good characters.

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Been reading up to 8 chaps now. Quite a cool plot you got here. I like how you stick to your character designs. Raymund only think of this as entertainment and nothing more. He's pretty laidback, not strictly driven to win the entire thing, definitely more concern about his chosen hero's 'performance', if you catch my drift. I don't particularly like him for the demeaning actions he dished to Elise, but it match with his background and current state of mind, I'll give you that. And what I like about Elise is her believable, logical reaction to the happenings around. She wasn't an avid WN reader or RPG lovers who expect a reincarnation and casual 'you are the chosen one' situation. Hence why the need to scream and run as her initial instinct. Kudos to you.Hopefully, you don't rush things and keep th character developments to happen slow. Keep up the good works, author :D

The story is still not failing to amaze me.....the progress of the plot can only be described using one word: perfect. Long TAO is rather calculative and plan well. Let's see what happens next.Awaiting the next chapter.👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

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