User
Crazy_Stamp
- Joined
- July 1,2024
- Reviews
- 313
...
Show More
The story is interesting but why the update lasted10days ago is the author doesnt want to contineu this story ?π€£π€π€π€π€π€π€π€π€π€π€π€π€π€π€π€π€π€π€π€
...
Show More
The story is written in a fast phase scenario. You will never get bored.
...
Show More
The first two chapters set up cool worldbuilding, and by chapter three I was along for the ride! If you're looking for a new Sci-Fi read, check it out. Jack is cool and believable as an MC. Early on, stakes are high and the types of threats being built up to are enormous in scale. This will be a good one, glad I found it early!
...
Show More
Author can you please explain your reasoning behind having multiple love interests but not doing a harem? Iβm not saying every story has to be a harem but introducing multiple love interests is the easiest way to have a dissatisfied audience because obviously the one you choose wonβt be liked by everyone. Havenβt read the story yet (which is why I put 5 stars) I just donβt see the benefit of it and was curious if you could provide your reasonings before I decide whether or not to read the story.
...
Show More
Lol It's cool, the characters and the world need to be better addressed, but the story isn't bad. I think that when there are more chapters it will improve these points more.
...
Show More
another case of missed used tags.in addition the plots quite bad the MCs schemes and actions are transparent and easy to identify for example the fire incident was poorly done the soot on his cloths after the fire,the smell.plus alibi actually makes him suspect
...
Show More
Nice one chief, good job keep writing ππΎππΎ. Burns eternal π₯
...
Show More
You'll fall in love with the characters.
...
Show More
Iβm currently 40 something chapters in and this story is truly sorry. Hopefully it gets better but itβs just a worse mvs.
...
Show More
gooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooood
...
Show More
I love apocalypse trope! I was struggling to read a book with Chinese characters because I'm not fluent in English and it's always written in deep english but this one is easy to understand. I enjoy the story a lot! Iβm curious about the main character before he became Zhang Wei. He is so mysterious. Good job, author! Looking forward.
...
Show More
The first few chapters of this story showcase a mix of different genres, including fantasy, comedy, and adventure. The author's writing style is engaging and descriptive, which allows readers to easily visualize the scenes in their minds. The characters are distinct and have unique personalities that make them interesting to follow, and the dialogue between them is well-written, with humor and wit sprinkled throughout.However, there are some areas that could be improved upon. The transitions between different scenes and perspectives could be smoother to prevent confusion, and there are some grammatical errors and typos that could be corrected with thorough editing. Additionally, some parts of the story feel rushed, especially toward the end where a lot of information is presented in a short amount of time.Overall, the story has potential but could benefit from some editing and revisions to improve the pacing and clarity of the story.
The hitman summoned as a hero(Computer problem)