Solstic: The Forgotten World

Hey guys Author here. This is my first time writing. I hope you like it.I'm open to all suggestions

I’m enjoying the novel’ the last part was Quite expected I like the details in combat and the reality it brings. Despite being his first book

"Will you stop fucking lying already?" The woman from behind went near us, he went behind Ryu with the blanket draped around her body. I wiped my tears and rose an eyebrow.

Sign~~~

"It is me who asks her to arrange this for me. Is there a problem, butler?"

Give him vampire powers, control darkness, blood, bats (not just control them but make them evolve), make him drink the blood of mutants and adapt their powers, immortality (with a reserve of blood and as long as he has it he can’t be killed, and make it so every time he uses his regeneration, evolve bats, create other vampires he uses that reserve, that way he will always hunt or capture criminals to be stronger) and the ability to become a mist of blood, a bunch of bats or change his appearance, and instead of making him weak against the sun, just make him become stronger in the night, and to get some balance make his initial power slightly weaker than Spider-Man in the middle of the day (in strength) and even more in agility, and the costume could be like the Batman who laughs but with a hood, and he could create a court of bats and make his own force and create armors and weapons for them and make them complete loyal making them vampires.

I didn't think of it till I heard, "-folks can't seem to understand what would make Leo Vivaldi, kill his family and close friends. People say that he was funny, outgoing, and kind, but was who they knew the real Leo Vivaldi? Henry Black, our psychiatrist can give us an inner look at our unbelievable murderer."

"Get into your places girls!" She said. The tapped her foot to the beat and counted us in.