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First and foremost, grammatical mistakes are miniscule if any. Second of all, consistency of updates and seems like author will not be given up on story anytime soon. It's a unique book and a rare kind to be found on webnovel. Not many book written by a female author with a female protag in a male body. While it feels like a basic fantasy template at first, it isn't any of that sort. While names are similar, magic system and fantasy world is completely unique to the book. I hope to see author and book shine more and improve.

No matter who you are, if you have read this, feel free to leave any comments—I am happy to engage with you. I also hope you can share your thoughts and suggestions about my story. - from the author.   

Pretty cool book, I can see that the mc is also turning into a villain in chapter 11, this book gives me hope in seeing ruthless mc's again. I missed those unhinged books.

the starting is just pure garbage, the mc became heartless immediately the system activated

Update as of chapter 29; The Vote- The Author is cooking on this one, although it is quite slow tbh, but you can feel it that the author is really taking his time building his characters, especially the Mc. So here is my opinion:Writing quality: 4.5/5  Although it might be a slightly more difficult to read, but I personally feel like it really suits the story, the writing in question is a bit poetic, maybe even too much in some instances, but in the second arc it starts to simplify, I feel like it was intentional.. to set the tone of the arc. My opinion, yours might differUpdating stability: 5/5 I mean what is there to say, one chap a day, sometimes 2-3. As is it the Authors hobby at this point in time it is good. Keep it up.Story development: 4/5I feel like the author is playing around too much. The pacing could be better, but it was enjoyable nonetheless. I mean as of right now it seems to be around 20-30 chaps with 1.5k - 2k word count for an average arc, so decide for yourself.If you are searching for a brain rot novel that you turn your brain down and read, this might not be for you. This is a journey of not only action, but emotions, bonds and so much more.Characters: 4.5/5 Maybe I’m biased, but I feel like the characters are good, The Mc especially in the latest chapters. He’s smart, but is still lacking. Not like the perfect Mc’s you sometimes encounter. While he is cold and doesn’t hesitate to slice at a dude, we still haven’t seen him in action properly, but that is why I’m exited for this arc. The side cast is good, although it could be a little more fleshed out. My personal favourite would be either Talia or Handy. Well we’ll see where the author takes this.Also what I have to mention. I really like the dialog of this work. Sometimes it might be too much, but it really reflects the dark world they live in, don’t worry its not edgy or "deep" 😂World Building - 3/5 - for nowWell although we still haven’t seen much of it, because we are still stuck in the slum. I believe the next arc might delve into that a little bit more. There was a hint of a Major conflict with the Beast, for now it seems a little bit generic conflict... But I’ll let the author cook. Maybe it’ll be a giant surprise waiting for us.Power system: 4/5 The power system is a generic mana/spells/elements but the Author could be hiding something in his sleeve.I mean there’s nothing wrong with it, I like such stories, but there is also nothing much to see. But again, we’re still in the beginning and haven’t seen much, so there could be way more waiting for us. Also there are Gods apparently, that actually exist and can grant power? if I understood it correctly. I give 5 stars because the book really deserves some exposure.Great work author, keep up the good work :)

The story is good pulling you in easily. Easy to understand. I also like the pacing. The power of the MC is unique and not OP. Characters have life and are not just 2D much better than some other junk on this site. This is my first time giving a review here. I suggest you to read this.

A good anti hero novel; probably one of the best I have seen on here over the last few years; If you are someone looking for a new book to read for WSA and you like good world building; fun characters and a good anti hero.This is your novel; I hope to see you at the top at the years end Author

Am at 11 chap currently. this is very engaging Mc character has lot of potential in future. keep it up.

It's a very good novelWith nice story lineAnd I'm looking Forward to the future Direction of the bookThumbs up to the writerWith it's Mixture of different genres It has a very Good Growth

I like the mc and butler, but it's way too slow and has so much unnecessary dialog

A/N: I rate my book 5 StarsEren: Shameless Author indeedA/N: I hope I'm not the only one using power stones on this novelEren: You definitely areA/N: 😭😭