below average,story pacing is too slow,sometimes it takes whole chapter to describe the appearance of a character,mc don't even use his abilities property,comedy feels pretty forced,

Nice story 👏👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌

overall this novel is good creative and many more and there is world build up that was good and intense and I think I will read more chapter I like how you wrote the story in the mc perspective that's all have a good journey through out the web novel God bless..

hm...I will waiting till it reach at least 50-75.good luck!

yes guys I too think he can use a bit morre exposer I think this novel has the chance tk grow with the help of right people and right place

Writing Quality ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐Stability of Updates⭐⭐⭐⭐Story Development⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐Character Design⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐World Background ⭐⭐ ⭐⭐⭐Now that I just wrote a review for a book I didn't like, it is time to write one for a book I like.No / minor spoilers ahead.Stability of Updates: With two chapters a day, the update schedule is quite good. Although, I wouldn't mind 20 chapters a day, considering I devoured all 20 chapters in just two hours!Story Development: The story is progressing well and stands out as one of the better novels in its genre.Character Design: This is where the novel truly shines. The MC is well-developed, and the side characters are given sufficient attention. The MC thinks things through before acting, which is a relief as I hate stupid MCs.World Background: Everything is explained just right, not too much not too little.I could write some more about how MC does this and that. But that would take away from you just reading it for yourself.

Looks promising and I am curious to see how the Author progresses with the plot and also how it eventually ends especially with the whole vampire Werewolf plot.

Well, chapter 1 and 2 is enough to make me want more of the novel and I really hope the novel gets more intresting, I see potential in it so I'll rate it a five star

This novel is very wonderful, I advise you to read it, It has an element of magic, and since the hero is the only one who can't use magic, it's an interesting start. I'll be back to complete the story now. I hope it maintains its quality and becomes better.

Author here! I won’t add too much to this one or turn it into something weird ahh... sci-fi like Common Sense Hijack System ( My previous book ). That would just mess things up. XD

Serious gooner issue, internet messed peope up, thisll prob be deleted but idc

Personally...I like the book, it's wonderful ❤️.You might like it too if you read it, comment, like, rate and add to your library.🥰🥰🥰🤗🤗🤗🤗🥰🥰🥰🥰