Pretending to Be an Untouchable Crime Boss

Wow truey lit now lets her into a little horror thought to check the two books out it's pretty good

The idea is repetitive and shallow, and why does it need this dramatic dimension? Can’t you write a story without any offensive events, such as sleeping together without marriage? You always portray women as nothing but a body in front of men. Just try to change the concept built around sleeping with someone else; it’s very bad.

Good story. I liked the premises. 👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻

dawg, this level of improvement. .. .is immeasurable

The more fungus, the more noble someone is.

In the middle of the town square in front of a brothel a huge fight was going on, a few thousand men were fighting, this was the biggest fight in the town right now, a man wearing the sigil of house Arryn was protecting a knight wearing the sigil of house Tully, the knight of house Tully seemed injured and before he could be finished by a man wearing a sigil of two griffins facing each other the knight of house Arryn intervened but was losing the fight after a short few minutes, the griffin knight stroke the shield of the falcon knight time and time again and after every strike the falcon knight only could back a few steps due to the power of his blows, the falcon knight parried a heavy strike directed to his head but his shield broke from the impact and he ended in the floor, defenseless against a better skilled knight, in that moment the young man knew everything was lost, he could only hope that his wife and his child would be safe and good after his departure, he started closing his eyes seeing the sword that was coming closer to his chest, his head felt dizzy and his blood seemed to be frozen but instead of the cold and sharp kiss of the sword the only thing he perceived was a grunt coming from the knight that was about to end his life, then he opened his eyes again and saw an arrow embedded in the man's shoulder making him drop his weapon, then another whistling sound came and this time the arrow took the man's knees making him fall on them, and another sound came presaging the arrival of another deadly arrow but this time the knight companions arrived in time and block the arrow with their shields, in that moment another sound came, the men behind him were cheering and chanting, his head felt light so he couldn't make sense of anything they were saying right now but he could see the knight that almost took his life trying to free himself from his companions but they were adamant in taking him out of there and retreat, seeing the threat abandoning the field he could finally breathe a sigh of relief, and then he looked to the place from where the arrows were coming, there was standing on top of a roof a group of knights wearing black armor, some were using their bows and taking down men in the streets, but one of them was looking directly at his position, the knight had a white and golden armor, it was clear he was the leader of that group of men and it seemed he was now the man that saved his life.

Hey now, you're an all-star, get your game on, go play

"*nodded >///<"