nightmare attack

Hello great author, I'm a huge fan of your work! Your book left a lasting impression on me, and I believe it has the potential to reach even more readers. I'd be honored to share some thoughts on how to enhance its impact and visibility. Would you be open to hearing my thoughts?

As you start reading , you can tell the writing quality is quite high , the author does indeed have talent. Normally I would get excited whenever I encounter this level of writing because this tells me the author is capable to write at least a decent story and somewhat compelling characters. Once you have those elements ..other flaws can be more or less ignored. Well ...with all I said above this should have been at the minimum an ok novel for me to read ....and yet...I stopped at ch 22. Why? Due to the author's choice of MC. Within the first few chapters we have the interactions between the MC and the  "first maid". In every interaction between them the MC is getting (to put it mildly) bullied , humiliated and extorted and yet  he is getting more and more excited about her. This tells you everything you need to know about the MC. In short , the author presents the MC as being a generic , "lame"/ "beta"/ "doormat

"Avengers, time to work for a living." Tony ordered over the conjoined radio.

Hey now, you're a rock star, get the show on, get paid

"Sure, the final gym battle between gym leader Cilan and challenger begins. "

"Swerte talaga ng babaeng iyon. Maganda na nga may boyfriend pang gwapo. Eh, tayo?" Sabi ni Anna sa gilid ko.

Which was probably why Wuying was more than a little alert, when he was approached a short while later.

up till now it is goodlets wait for more updates