- MC'nin güçlendikçe aldığı istatistiklerin düşmesi.- MC'nin delilik eksikliği ve yaşadığı şeylere rağmen gereksiz duygular göstermesi.《 bir insanın başına bu kadar şey geldikten her hangi bir duygu hissetmesi imkansız acı gibi yaşamın en temel hislerinden birini bile umursamazdı böyle şeyler yaşayan bir insan.》- 1000'den fazla anlamsız ölüm yaşayan bir canlı belli bir yerden sonra bilincini kaybeder ve yazarın bu konuya değinmemesi aşırı ciddi bir hikaye boşluğuna neden olmuş.- hikaye okuyucuyu içine çekemiyor.- hikayenin özgünlüğü 0'a yakın. İlk bölümleri güncele kadar okuduktan sonra roman sektörü eski zamanlardaki gibi olaa bu tarz bir romana vereceğim puanın ortalaması  en fazla 1.5 olurdu ama 2024-2025'de kaliteli romanların yok denecek kadar az sayıda olmasını ve özgün toplasan 30-50 roman olmasi ve bunların çoğunun 50 bölüme gelmeden bırakıldığını düşünürsek yeni romanlara yüksek puan vermeye başlamaya karar verdiğim ve Roman daha lik bölümlerde olduğu için bu romana bu kadar yüksek puan verdim.

This novel is good. Everything is just so fresh!

The story seems to hold mysterious and unpredictable love story, with the blend of raw, unrestrained and realistic human emotions, making readers reflect upon themselves, while reading it. Great work 👍

Its getting steamy... more and more 😝🫣 I can't wait for him to fall in love with the three personalities... seductive Donovan... more of Daddiii Donovan 🎉

It’s impressive that, even at just five years old, the child is already determined to learn how to survive on his own in the wild. The old man is bound to be some insanely powerful figure, or maybe he had a hybrid child in the past, which will come up in his backstory. That would explain why he reacted so distinctly to Rai.

nice work bro keep it up  nice story line

first time reading a webnovel i think this is a good starter for reading I've actual enjoy it so far would recommend

For now, the story is quite good. But seeing that the chapters are still a few, I can't say much about this novel. However, I could say that, although it is good, the writing is too draggy. Too much information on a lot of not really useful stuff. I hope the author takes my advice to not really dragged the description too much and also some paragraph are too long as i read on a phone. Thank you.

The story is quite good and well written, however the pacing is quite slow and the focus is only on the romance part. I picked it up for the Gacha and fantasy, but still the romance is quite interesting and I'm liking it despite not coming here for romance. As for the story, if we exclude the dates and dinner, the only real development was him helping his mother out. But again from the perspective of a romance novel, the characters are developing, there are feelings and emotions so that's a great thing.

review for FP.....................................

It's so good!! I recommend this to all readers.

I love your stories and your ideas are very creative .Your characters are really interesting,You have a great writing style that makes everything feel real.