overall, the writing is good, I liked the emotional turmoil and everything is so easily imaginable as if I am in their shoes. I liked how Theo, loves her and cares for her, howwever, I want to meet the male lead soon, and want to venture into their story

I just finished reading your book, and I have to say, it’s absolutely fantastic! I truly enjoyed it. I’d love to offer a few tips that might help boost the performance and visibility of your book even more. I believe these could take your work to the next level

Shameless Author Here:What to Expect:🔥 A dark and gritty LITRPG with a structured progression system featuring unique skills, powerful classes, Orders, rituals, and ancient relics.🔥 A world filled with political intrigue, warring factions, and betrayals at every turn.🔥 Moral dilemmas, sins, and virtues—how far will one go for power?🔥 Harem? Maybe. If readers want it, comment below.🔥 Dark themes, but no non-consent. The protagonist may toe the line, but he won’t cross it.

Hi, cherished writer, I recently read your book and found it to be really fascinating. What tactics did you employ to get it widely read and go viral?

I don’t read many books, but when I started reading this one, I found it relatable. Chapter 1 had a great hook. I can’t judge the book yet, but you should keep it up. Don’t worry about what others say—just focus on your story.

So far, this novel has a wide use of vocabulary, which makes for engaging reading. The writing itself is enjoyable, with well-crafted sentences that showcase the author’s skill. However, by Chapter 8, the story feels rushed. Events move quickly without much time for buildup, making it hard to fully connect with the world or characters.Speaking of the world, there isn’t much in the way of world-building. The setting feels vague, with little detail to anchor the reader in a specific time or place. This makes it difficult to become fully immersed. Additionally, the plot lacks a clear sense of direction. While some novels take time to unfold, this one doesn’t seem to be building toward anything specific—at least not yet.Overall, while the writing itself is strong, the pacing and lack of depth in both world-building and plot progression make it difficult to fully engage with the story. I’ll see if things improve later on, but so far, it feels somewhat underdeveloped.Another big issue I have is the lack one quotation marks. There is no use of them at all which can make it annoying to understand who is talking, for example “ ” - for when a character is talking out loud ‘ ‘ - for when mc is reading someone’s thoughts But anyway good effort from the author, can tell they care about writing.

The way author constructed the whole idea of making this is ona nother level. Not your typical-murim-like story. Keep it up! Hats off to your 1st book!

I love how the author writes this book. I hope he will continue on making this masterpiece!

"Service Charge" is an absolute gem! Ryo Okame is a refreshing and relatable protagonist, his hustle, determination, and struggles make him easy to root for. The blend of supernatural elements with his money-making schemes keeps the story engaging, with just the right balance of humor, mystery, and eerie suspense.The concept of using a third eye for financial gain is brilliant, and the deeper layers of intrigue make it impossible to put down. Each twist keeps you hooked, and the spirits he encounters add depth to the plot. Whether you're in for the adventure, the witty dialogue, or the ghostly chills, this story delivers on all fronts!Highly recommend for anyone looking for a fresh, thrilling, and entertaining read! Can't wait to see where Ryo's journey takes him next.

So, I've read up to what only has been released so far which is chapter 20. And I'm not much or at all of a romance person. But I can say I enjoyed this for it's descriptive explanations when its going over the background and how the characters feel and their surroundings. I definitely enjoyed the discrepancy of it. It felt as if this was happening in real life as I was reading this. So the imagination and fantasy is definitely there.  Which it on its own is amazing, because it shows that I was immersed into the story. I love how you write at the end of the chapter on the author's thoughts about the summary of each chapter going on. One thing I do wish though, was that some parts of the story would be more fast paced. It felt fast paced for the first five chapters of the story and then it felt as if it dropped for a portion of it. But that's my own preference. But for the most part the characters are adept and seemingly real in their emotions and how they act.

This story is interesting. I've read the first book, and I have been looking for this second one and I'm excited to continue reading to know Rolus and Luke's relationship.

Author here !  Give starting 2-3 chapters a chance . You will definitely like it .I am updating chapters 5-6 days a week .