Land Sword Immortal

Slow paced work, but I like the lore  and the way this novel is going, though it would hurt to do a little time skip.

too early to write the review but as far as I have read this is very very good in all ways, especially the world building.

The detailing done to the course of events is amazing. It is one of the most difficult aspect in writing and the author has done it great, especially in military settings. The language is good and fluent. Just reading it felt like watching a movie. It's good. I hope the author uploads more chapters.

girl this is a captivating web novel featuring the remarkable Cha Yoon. girl's journey through endless cycles of life and death is both thrilling and deeply emotional. Yoon’s brain and strategic thinking make her a relatable and inspiring character, as she confronts her past and strives to alter her fate.The author skillfully weaves action and introspection, inviting readers to reflect on their own choices. Overall, this novel is a must-read for fans of reincarnation stories, showcasing the power of second chances through Cha Yoon's unforgettable journey

This book shows promise but why do you hesitate to name characters? I had no idea who was talking to who in the first chapter. Also you might want to check over your paragraphs and slim them down.

"Are you injured?" He asked in concerned.

"Yeah! All my injuries have healed now thanks to Asia and I'm just glad that today's our last day, which reminds me… what are we going to be doing for Summer break president?" Issei asks.

"What did you dreamed about?" he asked.