Good pacing, great world building, grammar its smooth but slight tweaks then it all will be polished. Punctuations and paragraph spacing were good but their are some parts that needed to fixed and adjust but it doesn't mean the story is bad. It was good, and I highly recommended it, 😊it has a potential to be contracted as it has a unique sense, and the author ideas was very refreshing in a sense that you could really relate to. Regarding the character not sure yet, as of now I only read few chapters, I still need to read further to see and understand the character deeply. Overall great work, to more ink!

Been lurking since chapter 1. Just wanted to say you’ve created something incredible. Every update is like Christmas...............................

I think it’s really interesting that this guy turned down a system that would’ve made him powerful get a lot of money and getting left over the system goes to the Academy will be pretty surprised and it would be hilarious AVI accidentally end up doing what was supposed to be the main mission of the whole system and now thanks to him for not on. He ended up like this. He has to deal with a half system the lesser half two.

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Loving it so far! The flow of emotions feel so raw and realistic. Hope to see more from the author.

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Book is alright,,, but just to slow for me… mc is decent not smart but got potential.. I didn’t get that far ahead cause chapter lock, for such a slow book where roughly 15 chapter is spent in just school first day, investing in this is gonna be rough.i felt no excitement it was just plain.. if u got money to spent and time to wait for the thousands of chapters this book got a cool future.. but its not for me..  Good luck author..

This novel has a unique and very fresh story

A remarkable novel with carefully crafted and diverse settings. The descriptions are strong, and the dialogues are quite engaging, though they could benefit from a little more depth at times. Overall, it's a well-above-average read that captivates the reader.

Writing quality is 5/5. Update stability is 5/5 Story development is 5/5 Character design is 5/5 World background is 5/5What more can I say?Yes I am a serial reviewer. Bite me.

Nothing to see here guys... The MC is just tryna........I told you, there's really nothing to see.😶u200d🌫️

This is a type of story that i like the most. The MC is smart and the char development is good. This is similar of Classroom of Elite but this have another unique selling point. Nice Author!