I Became an Academy Game Character

Hello great author, I'm a huge fan of your work! Your book left a lasting impression on me, and I believe it has the potential to reach even more readers. I'd be honored to share some thoughts on how to enhance its impact and visibility. Would you be open to hearing my thoughts?

A really well written, kingdom building story, they take the usual tropes of gatcha, and the LitRPG and kind of refined them in a way that is refreshing. However, the pacing may be a bit slow for many people, personally I enjoyed it, as the story never feels like it loses track of itself, nor brushes aside, earlier elements this way. Also, there is something satisfying about seeing Atlas’s incremental growth. One thing I would like to see is a chapter dedicated to pulling back the “camera” and examining the world. Or even a golossary style chapter at the beginning. With all these stories and different power systems, being able to refrence something would be nice. Another worry I have, that is inherent with this genre and the Gatcha mechanic, is that characters get lost in the mix and story, as more and more characters are introduced, some older characters get accidentally pushed aside. Sometimes even forgotten and overwritten with another. So far, the author has not done that and has given each character time to shine. Just hope they keep it up.Great work author! Can’t wait for more.

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Sulon.

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