overall first chapter zapped me straight in with the attention to detail to the characters in the way they were described. could easily imagine them! Love it!🥳

you gotta continue this fic it's one of the best ones about Hip Hop on here and there so many ways you can take it like Pac starting a Record label with talents in different genres and not just a rap label, the movie business beef with the gov and Diddy I can't wait to see what you do

This is the story of a girl that is playing the best '2-pair' (Certainly not the best, but far from the worst) hand that was dealt to her considering she wasn't allowed to fold.With a loving family and seemingly ordinary blessing, this reincarnation into the same world, but very different house shows undeniable heart. The world building is one of the strongest aspects of this novel. You are taken for the same ride as the young girl we follow through all the twist, turns, and delightful misunderstandings that we can all enjoy while smiling wryly while knowing all the major crises (At least in her childhood) are adorable little bumps in the road.One cannot help but wonder how our main character, her brother, and her entire family will continue to grow even at this early stage. The pacing of the story is indeed extremely slow, but why would you need high adventure when to a child, offending that brat of a Prince is just as major as facing a hundred foes?As for the author's style, 'developing' is the best term. One can easily see the tweaks and adjustments made to the style as the author goes. There is clearly room for improvement, but since the author is going without an editor (I assume) these things will only improve with time, practice, and carefully thought out criticism from the reader base. That's not to say it's bad, on the contrary, especially when making the thoughts of a little girl come alive in your head, I can almost see the manga pages draw themselves in many places.I commend the author for the stability in their updates and am looking forward to reading this story more and more, which I hope can be taken as my highest of praise. My only advice is keep writing and keep honing yourself. You have a gift for story telling, so please tell your story.

This is my kinda story, face slapping from the start👏🏽👏🏽👏🏽👏🏽.My only issue with these trial stories is that lotsa times they’ll never go past “60” chapters 🤷🏽🤷🏽

İlk okuyucu incelemen benden gelsin yazar.Hikayenin zaman akışı ideal diğer evrim romanlarında olduğu gibi her büyük ilerleme için 100-200 geçmesine gerek yok gibi görünüyorMC'nin et yemekten çekinmemesi için 10 larca bölüm geçmesi gerekmemektedir bence büyük bir + onun dışında mc ilerde murderhobo zihinsel kapasitesi sahip olsa bence iyi olur yazar.İlk bölümleri değerlendirdikten sonraki kısa potansiyel yorumum : Yüksek potansiyele sahip bir evrim hikayesi olabilir sadece efsanevi yeteneklerin biraz daha nadir ve güçlü olması daha iyi olabilirdi sayın yazar.

good can wait to see it in drama happening in real life

I love this OP mc and Plz Plz Plz dont do something like“oh no MC turned into a kid and losed his powers temporarily or somethinf happend and he sacrificed or sealed his powers… if you want other people to fight because you want a epic battle or sonething to write then just do it while mc watches or so and dont force it with mc losts his powers so his friends, wifes etc. do the battling and he cant interfere with his OP powers…

Let me give you all 5 stars.. I am just enjoying the story. Keep working author, i am here to support you..

Is there romance in this novel? please no it holds back the MC

I love the world this shows and, how unsettling it is.Complete honesty 9/10It gives me fear of what happenes next for some reason, i dont know if its because im reading it . havent felt fear like this in any horror movie i have watched.Honestly flabbergasted at how good this is, excited and expecting more great content.I could say that the summary at the end may need a bit more work.Like i would like to see as time goes on the summary gets more deteriorated and unhinged.But thats just what i may like to see you do you, cuz up untill now you havent dissapointed.                             -best of regards,                                                                Abhi

Hello Dear Readers, this is my first time writing a werewolf story. The story contains a rollercoaster ride of Melissa and Radulf.  While former is fighting to be loved and seen by her mate, the latter wants revenge. I can't reveal much, but Radulf's character is filled with angst because of what happened with him in the past. Once it will be revealed, you all will connect to him more and more as the story progresses. As for the female lead, Melissa, she had a tough childhood and was being locked in the cold palace for 18 years until one day she was ordered to marry Radulf and finally got free. However, that was not her freedom since she has to navigate a lot of obstacles. Radulf has become thick skinned after losing his family and himself too, so his actions are going to anger all of you. However, with time he will melt away and realise how wrong he was to Melissa. I hope you all give a chance to this story. Thank you and Happy Reading 💜

Yeah I’m the author . I put up a 5 since this is the first chapter . And you can’t tell all of this from the first chapter .So just slam 5 please . I’ll make it lives up to it .