First Book I've Read. Here's things Id' like to point out since my expectations are still low:• Main Character's Name is still unknown, maybe it has to do with the story?• Complex Characters. I personally enjoy them.. like how they seem to be staying in a way that would keep you guessing how they'll react. Especially that one icy personality of a friend.• Since it's a mystery, It's really cool how you interpreted ( ■ ) as something that's easy to guess, like what we're gonna guess is somewhat in the right track.• Cool uses of ( —, -, –) in the story.

i read the first five chapters and is pretty much interesting, its the typa stories I enjoy; vyle creatures, a system and dark fantasy. And have a tag of romance which i like pretty much, I just hope it will be good writen

ooh it is good well i just started and it seems okay

I am absolutely blown away by your novel what a plot 👏👏👏 . Much love ❤️❤️.

Really cool story so far! I love the character design and how you set up the father being fake in the first chapter. Its a really interesting lead in to the story, and I'm looking forward to there being more chapters.

Very good book, I haven’t seen many, if any, books like this.

Author here, started writing for fun and just to improve my writing, there is a lot I could do with the story. If you enjoy, comments are appreciated. Chapters daily, for updates you can follow my twitter @MonamaAuthor

book will take you to a romantic ride and some chapters are dark guyss

Story looks promising hoping Mc will unite india under one banner and make a empire with colonies very excited for future chapters

Yeah, it's a five-star read. If I had to describe this WN in one word, it would be underrated. It deserves more attention and recognition. The author has a knack for writing, and while it's still too early to say much about the story, the writing is solid. Keep it up—I'm looking forward to seeing how it develops. You've gained a loyal reader, and you’ll probably see my comments on every chapter (maybe).

Really really really good yuri Novel.For me, who likes yuri, this is the good novel.

I can't bro imma stop right now because if I don't I will get a cliff hanger because it currently has only 11 chapters! This is soooo good! I can't explain it it's just that-! I can feel the momentum ya know? like the aura and the atmosphere of place and the people and how Mr. Passerby-Swordsman just appears and shows who's the boss!The names are good too and easy to remember and the writing style? Perfect!