Love Me! (Like You) Hate Me!

read till the latest chapter... and I have many problem with this story and how the author wrote it...okay, first let's start with something that I like about this story1. I like the concept about combined story of culinary world and underground world2. I like the harem development3. Ming Ming is cuteand here is what I didn't like about the story1. story development, till the latest chapter I read (title:dummy daddy) I barely see any development of the story on the area of cooking or the underground. on the chef or cooking plot, we only read about how MC can cooking a really good food, luckily got rich friend that let him "borrow" the restaurant, and sell the food there, and conveniently his rich friend have rich uncle that help MC promote his restaurant... he want to expand his restaurant so buying few store, and currently randomly got selected to participate in cooking competition... there is barely any development, morever it lack on the food department, the variety of the food, the description, and the feeling of passion in cooking... I think author need to read more about cooking story so that he know what I mean... for the part of underground, the development is a bit better, I'll talk what I hate in this part on point 2.2. the MC is stupid and all the character here is stupid. on the underground part, the MC already got harassed and attacked many time by Houzi Gang, and he did nothing to protect his business and close one, whrn he is close with the girls, finally he think about protecting them and suddenly he want to control the leader of the gang, like... WTF, I got really irritated by this because of MC stupidity, he doesn't have anything he can do to control the gang boss, how? and he really acted on it, and a stupid plot that made me want to throw my phone happen... sigh... finally he got lucky shot and killed the boss and this shit "snake without head" got mentioned a lot, is the MC really think that metaphor is a real thing? till one of his girlfriend got kidnapped and almost got raped by those "snake without head"...3. the plot that the author wrote for the face slapping element is really bad... it feels forced and unrealisric and the ending/conclusions/punishment is not satisfying...4. I feel really uncomfortable when reading the story, the plot is too thick and there is a little room for reader to rest...5. I hate when author randomly put torture scenehere is what I yhink you should do author:1. made the characters less stupid, you can start it by thinking "will people in real life do it"2. you should do more research on cooking story, not about the cooling but how the author of cooking story convey things and how they made their story insteresting3. when you want to write face slap, make the conclusion or punishment satisfying. when someone slap you, you want to slap the one that slapped you harder right? so you should made the conclussion or punishment bigger than the set up...4. make a space... make the story in arc so that the plot is not a mess right now, this is really important so the plot in your story will not be extra tick like now, so your reader can have a time to rest...for example in arc 1, make the set up, make the problem, and make the problem bigger, a solustion and ths conclusion and repeat it on arc 2, 3, 4, 5.....5. convey feelings, not telling plots. you need to know what feeling you want to convey in each word, sentence, paragraph, and chapter, and also think will your reader feel the same or not...6. understand your target reader, wrote what they like and don't wrote what they hate, you can research this by reading story of the same genre. btw this point is not absolute, you can adapt it into what you want to write and combine it with what your reader like and dislike to make your own decision...

reading this in the daily free selection, and i've already decided it isn't worth the time. The grammar and syntax are atrocious, the MC speaks as if he is either 5 years old or the neaderthal from looney toons. either the author needs to brush up on his english, or fire his translator and hire a new one. it completely detracts from any entertainment value the novel could have. the story is developing at a decent place, but the authors excessive use of Deus ex Machina makes for a poor read, and the MC faces no challenges he cannot surmount. Great literature shows struggle and growth, outside from levelling up, and being so overpowered that no one can face you. let the MC lose a few times, die or almost die. the base idea of the MC is interesting, and the world concept is fairly decent, albeit an overdone trope, and if it were better written it would be entertaining enough to read, but as it is, I won't continue reading it for free, let alone spend coins/passes on it.

This has really great potential. So far the plot is intriguing, the characters are well thought out, and each chapter has good content and is not just fillers. Looking forward to more of the novel and hopefully we'll have a steadier updates/more chapters released.

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He, Ling Tian,  was not only a formidable weapon specialist, but he was also a master practitioner of Form and Will Boxing who even managed to cultivate his internal energy.

Napatalon ako sa gulat nung may kumulbit sa balikat ko. Si Anna pala. Akala ko kung sino na. Bumuntong hininga na lang ako bago nahimas-masan sa lahat.

That figure wrapped in whitish pink, stood where it appeared without moving a muscle as it seemed to be staring at Leto the only one conscious in the place.